Jak's bro

Chapter 1 - All nightmares have a begining
Submitted: January 24, 2004 • Updated: January 24, 2004
Word count: 763 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 197

Chapter 2 - Meet Sig
Submitted: February 1, 2004 • Updated: February 1, 2004
Word count: 441 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 160

Chapter 3 - Melon
Submitted: February 13, 2004 • Updated: February 13, 2004
Word count: 171 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 185

Chapter 5 - Melon the medum
Submitted: April 6, 2004 • Updated: April 6, 2004
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 148

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Linkstarking on May 16, 2004, 8:47:01 PM

Linkstarking on May 16, 2004, 8:47:01 PM (Chapter: 6)

thanks that made me feel better

Collen on May 15, 2004, 7:00:06 AM

Collen on May 15, 2004, 7:00:06 AM (Chapter: 6)

ear's cock back* what do you mean? So, I am a freaken clut's at my school, but i still go on. I never do anything right to, so i still go on, you should do the same. don't give up

pinkgirl on April 6, 2004, 11:35:09 AM

pinkgirl on April 6, 2004, 11:35:09 AM (Chapter: 5)

nice chap Linkstarking! ^_^

Collen on April 6, 2004, 9:17:53 AM

Collen on April 6, 2004, 9:17:53 AM (Chapter: 5)

I am loving this story Jhon^_^ i will get melon someday on ok? cool chapter.

supershykitty123 on March 17, 2004, 1:00:04 PM

supershykitty123 on March 17, 2004, 1:00:04 PM (Chapter: 4)

Me:OMG WOOT!!!! THE BARON IS UGLY AND YOU'RE ON A SUGER RUSH!!!! XD
Baron Praxis: BE QUIT FOOL!!!
Me: *runs* Gotta go to bed bye! :)

Linkstarking on March 15, 2004, 8:43:00 AM

Linkstarking on March 15, 2004, 8:43:00 AM (Chapter: 4)

If you can help me....................PLEASE HELP ME!!!.................comment your ideas

Linkstarking on March 12, 2004, 3:16:51 AM

Linkstarking on March 12, 2004, 3:16:51 AM (Chapter: 4)

I feel stupid right about now

Linkstarking on February 25, 2004, 1:48:11 AM

Linkstarking on February 25, 2004, 1:48:11 AM (Chapter: 3)

Stuid KEYBORD

Linkstarking on February 25, 2004, 1:47:42 AM

Linkstarking on February 25, 2004, 1:47:42 AM (Chapter: 3)

Collen you can draw it...........I need to draw her tp

Ottselgurl on February 14, 2004, 12:52:07 AM

Ottselgurl on February 14, 2004, 12:52:07 AM (Chapter: 3)

Cool chap *does birthday dance*

pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM

pinkgirl on February 13, 2004, 9:46:26 PM (Chapter: 3)

uuuuuuuu... O.O she sounds scary.... NOT that im scared or anything! *makes tough mug* hehe... happy late birthday by the way! nice chap!

Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM

Collen on February 13, 2004, 5:56:36 PM (Chapter: 3)

May I do the challenge? well, I don't really want to enter but can I still draw it for you? good chapter!

Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM

Linkstarking on February 5, 2004, 2:03:04 AM (Chapter: 2)

Ya, whats your charicter like

Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM

Collen on January 31, 2004, 11:51:13 PM (Chapter: 2)

this is very interesting

pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM

pinkgirl on January 31, 2004, 11:35:24 PM (Chapter: 2)

ok, nice chap. Maybe u should describe things more? some details? I like ur writing style, this is great! ^_^

Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM

Collen on January 31, 2004, 7:24:30 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is cool adds to favs*

Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM

Linkstarking on January 31, 2004, 11:59:38 AM (Chapter: 1)

Ya

supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM

supershykitty123 on January 28, 2004, 2:17:17 AM (Chapter: 1)

Want 2 be in my story? I hope so I think ur story iz kule! ^_^

Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM

Linkstarking on January 26, 2004, 2:40:18 AM (Chapter: 1)

...............I can't help it I'm thinking as hard as I can your treating me like a little kid I'm 15 i'll be 16 on feburay 12

pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM

pinkgirl on January 26, 2004, 2:03:55 AM (Chapter: 1)

^^;;;; Then stop talking toa urself. I dont think it gives a good impression to those whos reading this. Glad ya made it one chap. but STILL make them longer. making chapters this is short, is just taking up space. Not rude, but ment as a suggestion for improvement!^^ and i still like ur writing style, nice and detailed. update soon!

Linkstarking on January 24, 2004, 6:12:36 PM

Linkstarking on January 24, 2004, 6:12:36 PM (Chapter: 1)

? ......I seem to allways be talking to my self.......maybe thats way Jak is trying to put me in a strate jaket*start runing*

Linkstarking on January 24, 2004, 2:32:14 PM

Linkstarking on January 24, 2004, 2:32:14 PM (Chapter: 1)

Hear It is again *pulls out Silver bullet* I will not do that again