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Accident

Basically, Kyo is hit by a car and hospitalized for damage to his lungs. It only gets worse over time. He finally confesses his love for Tohru, but does she love him? Even if she did could their love be strong enough to conquer death itself? Kyoru fluff!

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Accident Occurs
Submitted: June 19, 2010 • Updated: June 19, 2010
Word count: 966 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 192

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LexxieRedfire on November 18, 2010, 4:07:57 AM

LexxieRedfire on (Chapter: 1)
LexxieRedfirePLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE WRITE MORE! I REALLY LIKE THIS AND WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

Living_Dead_Girl on June 20, 2010, 11:14:42 PM

Living_Dead_Girl on (Chapter: 1)
Living_Dead_GirlI haven't seen FB in a long time, but the characters don't seem to be out of character, so nice job with that.
There are many grammatical mistakes, but it's mostly just a lot of randomly placed commas, nothing too serious or hard to understand.
I rather like how you have action in there first thing, not waiting a million years for something to happen.
Overall, it's written better than most of the stuff I see on here XDD!
Keep it up. =D

Little_miss_angel on June 19, 2010, 2:49:01 AM

Little_miss_angel on (Chapter: 1)
Little_miss_angelJUST SO EVERYONE KNOWS, ON FAC MY ACCOUNT ON FANFICTION.NET IT FUNNGURL!! I posted it there first XD