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untitled poems

ok these are some of my first poems so be nice, constructive critisism is great but dont overdo it k?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - 3 of em
Submitted: January 20, 2007 • Updated: January 20, 2007
Word count: 245 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 155

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MCRchick25 on January 20, 2007, 11:43:57 AM

MCRchick25 on (Chapter: index)
MCRchick25dammit i meant last word

MCRchick25 on January 20, 2007, 11:43:11 AM

MCRchick25 on (Chapter: 1)
MCRchick25lol i just noticed thers "..." after every first word