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C'mon Lets Go

heh i was bored (what else is new) but i like it >^-^< its 'sposed ta be
some-what up lifting. comment if u please.



Chapter 1 - C'mon Lets Go
Submitted: November 5, 2003 • Updated: November 5, 2003
Word count: 138 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 137


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rikkuXsora on January 20, 2005, 9:34:56 AM

rikkuXsora on (Chapter: 1)
rikkuXsoraThat is very very good!!!!! Think you could look at some of my poems.

Jailcrow_of_Mandos on July 29, 2004, 2:55:25 PM

Jailcrow_of_Mandos on (Chapter: 1)
Jailcrow_of_MandosVery nice imagery =) It would amke a very nice song, like the other person said, and I like how you show several different places. The end was a bit quick though!

tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 5:53:35 PM

tiler_james on (Chapter: 1)
tiler_jamesme likey! XD This could be made into a song! ^-^

Sakura_Sagara on November 19, 2003, 11:59:51 PM

Sakura_Sagara on (Chapter: 1)
Sakura_Sagaranice poem. I draw in Spanish! ^^