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Retaliation

The Dark Empire begins to assemble their forces in great numbers. Their goal, to conquer the entire Anime Universe.

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Chapter 1 - Retaliation: The Three Excellencies Take Charge
Submitted: January 22, 2005 • Updated: January 22, 2005
Word count: 2566 • Size: 14k • Comments: 3 • views: 712

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SoraYamato on October 6, 2006, 8:04:50 PM

SoraYamato on (Chapter: index)
SoraYamatoWell that makes my comment before completely irrelevant.
Cavendish has great public speaking skills. Any debating team would want him for his ability to create a good argument regardless which side of the argument they must take. Your use of imagery creates a chilling picture painted in greys and military strictness that sends a shiver up the spine and makes one dread the inevitable battle that will surely endanger our heroes.
Very interesting plot development.
Keep up the good work

ShadowDragon2 on August 25, 2006, 2:48:08 PM

ShadowDragon2 on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowDragon2Very interesting. Great job!

Cara on January 26, 2005, 4:14:03 AM

Cara on (Chapter: 1)
CaraOk so thats what it means. Awesome job.

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 24, 2005, 3:36:54 AM

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on (Chapter: 1)
MaZz-Da-mAsTeRits just amazing how u can make ur own characters and language, u even made a whole saga as if u were the one who created the anime, ur stories and pics rock, i must admit u r better than me, u r the best , keep it up! see ya!
P.S: i got more pics submitted and i would appreciate comments on it thanx,see ya!