Untitled Love
Submitted May 23, 2005 Updated September 15, 2005 Status Incomplete | Shiv was never really the romantic type... until one day when he met another Bang Baby, in an unusual situation...
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Prologue
Submitted: May 23, 2005 • Updated: May 23, 2005
Word count: 457 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 334
Chapter 2 - A New Beginning
Submitted: June 8, 2005 • Updated: June 8, 2005
Word count: 1179 • Size: 6k • Comments: 10 • views: 310
Chapter 3 - Shiv Meets his Match
Submitted: June 10, 2005 • Updated: June 10, 2005
Word count: 1887 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 274
Chapter 4 - Second Meetings
Submitted: September 15, 2005 • Updated: September 15, 2005
Word count: 1034 • Size: 5k • Comments: 6 • views: 281
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Bikewriter on June 28, 2007, 7:19:38 AM
Bikewriter on (Chapter: 2)
The name Chloe doesn't really fit the character and when you write the name has to fit the person unless its a horror book.Bikewriter on June 28, 2007, 7:16:29 AM
Bikewriter on (Chapter: 1)
I'm playing the part of Hasulhop! Great intro-I like how you put a period at the end of a couple of words like:Bikewriter on June 28, 2007, 7:12:48 AM
Bikewriter on (Chapter: index)
Nightbird is everywhere! Nightbird is Paula Abdul.Froze8 on November 30, 2005, 4:53:43 AM
Froze8 on (Chapter: 4)
What happened! I must know! Is she a goner!Froze8
Nessieluv123 on October 11, 2005, 12:48:44 PM
Nessieluv123 on (Chapter: 3)
*squeal* YOU GOT SHIV PERFECT! And I think they are so cute together ^_^! Starwolf24 on October 1, 2005, 8:24:50 AM
Starwolf24 on (Chapter: 4)
AHHH!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!AHHHH!!!Great story tho!!!Nessieluv123 on September 29, 2005, 12:30:45 PM
Nessieluv123 on (Chapter: 4)
Oh what a cliffhanger! If you dont update soon... um... I'll explode due to suspense.... yes. Well shiv is sooo like well shiv! *drools over pic of shivvy* BYE!Nessieluv123 on September 29, 2005, 12:24:39 PM
Nessieluv123 on (Chapter: 1)
I tottally agree wuth nightbird, the prologue really makes people wanna read it! ^_^richiefoleyluver on September 17, 2005, 7:44:43 AM
richiefoleyluver on (Chapter: 4)
hey cool story im makeing a storywith u in it u come in in chapter 2 and u r my cousin so can u put me in to plez and thanxoh and i loooked at ur pics cool
Nightbird on September 16, 2005, 3:45:38 AM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 4)
Your story is so great like I said yesterday you captured Shiv's personality perfectly and Chloe rocks! I love 'em. Can't wait 'til the next comes.Nightbird on September 16, 2005, 3:45:35 AM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 4)
Your story is so great like I said yesterday you captured Shiv's personality perfectly and Chloe rocks! I love 'em. Can't wait 'til the next comes.Starwolf24 on September 14, 2005, 10:28:30 PM
Starwolf24 on (Chapter: 2)
COOL STORIE! CHECK OUT MINE! ok so it's not that long ^^' Im gonna write more today!Nightbird on September 4, 2005, 2:08:28 PM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 3)
I think that Shiv was convayed perfectly. LOL Their the cutest Bang Baby couple (my second is Aquamaria and Hotsreak)! Nightbird on August 22, 2005, 3:06:30 AM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 3)
I love this keep up the good work. I can't wait 'til the next one. As for me I'm working on Sparks's Dcu animated design but school starts tomarrow so I'll have less time to do stuff.Nightbird on August 22, 2005, 2:06:09 AM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 2)
I think that Chloe is going to be a really cool character.Nightbird on August 22, 2005, 1:48:27 AM
Nightbird on (Chapter: 1)
Great prologue it really sets a cool mood and helps take a place for how the story begins and very well written.richiefoleyluver on August 8, 2005, 11:25:32 AM
richiefoleyluver on (Chapter: 2)
luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv itShiv_Freak on June 11, 2005, 1:08:04 AM
Shiv_Freak on (Chapter: 2)
sk8trchick131313 >> yeat I noticed that the pics don't show up either. But I fixed it 'cause I think I used the wrong format. I save mine as .rtf (rich text format) heartless-sinner on June 10, 2005, 3:53:26 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 3)
i wish i could skip down the street singing...of corse i would totally get wacked! ^-^ awesome chapter!heartless-sinner on June 10, 2005, 3:43:41 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 2)
i love the first chapter and so now i am goining to read your third! ^-^heartless-sinner on June 10, 2005, 3:36:30 PM
heartless-sinner on (Chapter: 1)
i used to love Static Shock and this brings back memories! it is really awesome so far. ^-^sk8rchick131313 on June 10, 2005, 2:18:35 PM
sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 3)
oooh, i LOVE this story! yeah, those two are really smitten all right. aww, i cant wait until the next chapter...keep writing!sk8rchick131313 on June 10, 2005, 2:10:31 PM
sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 2)
oh yeah, and what do you save your stories as, bc mine all turn really weird once i get them online, but no one will tell me how to fix it! *pouts*sk8rchick131313 on June 10, 2005, 2:08:45 PM
sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 2)
wait, how did you fix it? *gives puzzled look* because i noticed about every other story and picture i looked at for the past week wont show up on the screen, and thats just....weirdShiv_Freak on June 10, 2005, 1:40:36 PM
Shiv_Freak on (Chapter: 2)
Yeah I know, I have no clue what happened, but I fixed it. ^_^sk8rchick131313 on June 8, 2005, 11:22:00 AM
sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 2)
wait, where's the story???? ok, this is weird, bc the page isnt there or smth.....sk8rchick131313 on May 23, 2005, 11:35:19 AM
sk8rchick131313 on (Chapter: 1)
awwww, its only the prologue?! wut a waste of time...*mutters mutinously*jk