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Some lies are good but the majority out there are bad. A poem about lying which is not as easy as it sounds because there are always consequences.



Chapter 1 - Lying
Submitted: May 6, 2004 • Updated: May 6, 2004
Word count: 221 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 155


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AmbiguousMonk on August 16, 2005, 2:51:24 AM

AmbiguousMonk on (Chapter: 1)
AmbiguousMonkI understand want you mean in this piece.
I try to be as honest as I can,
But I do lie sometimes,
And the guilt follows me around like a shadow.
Constantly on my back,
Weighing me down.

I love your poems.
All of them.
They are very, very, well written.
I really like your pictures too.
Your an excellent artist,
In writing and drawing.
Keep up the good work!

Riotgrl340 on February 23, 2005, 10:55:44 PM

Riotgrl340 on (Chapter: 1)
Riotgrl340its awesome

Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:22:24 AM

Anime-Chick on (Chapter: 1) it..

Slippingthroughreality on June 15, 2004, 3:31:15 AM

Slippingthroughreality on (Chapter: 1)
SlippingthroughrealityI hate lying, especially when I get caught out. Sometime I can be a chronic liar other times I am very honest, it depends on what the situation. Yeah this poem does reflect the guilt.. my guilt because this poem was composed after I made a huge mess out of lying... oops O.o

foltzfarm on June 15, 2004, 1:13:20 AM

foltzfarm on (Chapter: 1)
foltzfarmAnother poem greatly wroten. Lies are little buggers. -_- I hate lying, but sometimes i do it. On accident of course, when I'm in a tight spot. But this poem reflects the guilt that follows. Nicely written!! Great job!!^^