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Invisable Girl

Have you ever felt alone, abandoned? Well this song is about a girl who feels the same way. Like shes invisable.



Chapter 1 - Invisable Girl
Submitted: August 9, 2004 • Updated: August 9, 2004
Word count: 181 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 110


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Slippingthroughreality on December 22, 2004, 5:45:32 AM

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SlippingthroughrealityI agree wandering_spirit with school being a nightmare, if I didn't ahve friends then my life would be in shambles and I feel that way to anime_chick, i hope you make some new friends soon

Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:20:48 AM

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Anime-Chicki hate to feel that way..but i do..especially now i'm in a new class and everything..they've already known each other for a year..and now i came in..horrible feeling..and at home..ugh..don't talk about home..i'm the youngest i 'can't talkabout these things yet '..anyway..sorry for my this poem too! favs

Wandering_Spirit on September 6, 2004, 6:55:51 AM

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Wandering_SpiritI guess that song speaks out to a lot of us. I'm the kind of person who was the "last one picked" and "first one blamed" at school. I won't go into detail, but if they say "school is the best time of your life", then the rest of my life will be a nightmare.

Maybe I should place an idea or two I had... if I can remember them.

Slippingthroughreality on August 15, 2004, 7:09:16 PM

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SlippingthroughrealityGod you have no idea how much I can relate to what you are saying, I don't think your pathetic, thank you for commenting on my song ^-^

RedALiCe on August 14, 2004, 4:11:17 PM

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RedALiCesometimes i feel that way, like im invisable and noone even knows im there. i mean i could fall down and crack my skull open and bleed all over the ground and the only way anyone would know i was there would be if they tripped over me and fell. geeze look at me rambling on about myself(pathetic) anyway i love your poetry it speaks out very clearly nan musically... well laters...