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Treasure Planet (revisited)

What would you do if you found an old treasure map to a legendary planet? Jim Hawkins, your average 16 yer old, found one, and no he's out to fins the treasure and prove his own worth.
author's note: Ive added a character and changed it up a bit. Enjoy!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The beginning
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 1936 • Size: 19k • Comments: 1 • views: 208

Chapter 2 - Cabin Boy
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 2400 • Size: 23k • Comments: 0 • views: 166

Chapter 3 - A Friendship
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 2079 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 154

Chapter 4 - The Eye of the Storm
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 1929 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 194

Chapter 5 - Land Ho
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 1497 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 194

Chapter 6 - Treasure and Secrets
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 2381 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 175

Chapter 7 - The Map
Submitted: May 31, 2006 • Updated: May 31, 2006
Word count: 1745 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 194

Comments

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Redwall_Artist on July 31, 2006, 7:46:28 AM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 7)
Redwall_ArtistYay! I feel sorry for Bekkah in this chapter.

Redwall_Artist on July 9, 2006, 11:42:47 PM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 6)
Redwall_ArtistAnd now we know about Bekkah! Great story! Do continue.

Mutos_gurl101 on June 30, 2006, 1:27:22 PM

Mutos_gurl101 on (Chapter: 5)
Mutos_gurl101Cool!!! I enjoyed reading this... good job

Mutos_gurl101 on June 30, 2006, 1:18:07 PM

Mutos_gurl101 on (Chapter: 1)
Mutos_gurl101wow... lol I finally found the story whooohooo!!!1 *must keep reading* I like it so far...

Redwall_Artist on June 28, 2006, 8:59:02 AM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 5)
Redwall_ArtistWow. Good one. I know what happens next, but I want to read it. You can paint a picture in the reader's head.

Redwall_Artist on June 19, 2006, 2:49:31 PM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 3)
Redwall_ArtistI like how you took the movie and worded it.

raineces on May 31, 2006, 1:22:45 PM

raineces on (Chapter: index)
rainecesHi there. I like Treasure Planet, too. I'd love to see your work 'bout it. ^_^