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I came up with this in like 5 min. But it really is a craptacilar poem



Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: May 21, 2005 • Updated: May 21, 2005
Word count: 70 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 120


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gabbyg04 on June 6, 2005, 11:12:14 AM

gabbyg04 on (Chapter: 1)
gabbyg04hey thats a good poem..and its true...i like
to write in the spur of the moment
too...!!...most of my poems i
write pretty quick 2....hope 2c
more !!...great job!

RiversBlood on June 2, 2005, 6:19:39 AM

RiversBlood on (Chapter: 1)
RiversBloodIf you'd work longer on this it would have been better. It looks as though you focused to much on ryhming. Not all poems have to ryhme (SP? T.T) Don't try so hard to make it ryhme, try a little harder to get more emotions into it. I can't wait for another one of your poems! Keep posting ^.^

xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxo on May 29, 2005, 7:28:37 AM

xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxo on (Chapter: 1)
xoxoAMERICANIDIOTxoxohey i think u should of got more comments i liked it so those other people dont know what there not commenting about:) ^6^ ^.^ ^@^

UNITED_WE_SUCK on May 21, 2005, 7:41:19 AM

UNITED_WE_SUCK on (Chapter: 1)
UNITED_WE_SUCKK this really appeared weird so sorry if it looks funny theres no rite spacing ^?^