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Chapter 5 - The Proposal

Just a little story object thing I thought up in my spare time. Nothing that extravagant.

Chapter 5 - The Proposal

Chapter 5 - The Proposal
This is probably not going to turn out the way I want it, but humor me, OK?

Chapter 5: The Proposal

I was out in the forest, looking for herbs for the doctor, when I heard a loud silence, as if a large airship-maybe called the Highwind-was landing on a large patch of grass. Actually, that's exactly what it was. I was about to go back to Mideel, to warn of a hostile takeover from Shinra, when I recognized the two people and one red lion-wolf that got off the airship. I dashed forward and caught the unsuspecting Vincent in my arms.
"Vincent! Tifa! Thank God you're here," I said, burying my face in Vincent's whatever-it's-called, that part of his cape.
"What about me?" Nanaki asked.
"Sun!" Vincent said. "What're you doing here?"
"Ummm..." I thought for a moment. "Running from all that's familiar. But I was wrong, Vinny, forgive me."
"Don't call me Vinny!" he growled, then his voice softened unexpectedly. "But of course I forgive you."
Tifa stared at him, then shook her head. "Sun, have you seen Cloud?" she asked.
I released my hold on Vincent. "You'd better come with me," I said. "It's bad news. He's...well, I'll leave the doctor to tell you that."
"Doctor!" TIfa exclaimed. "Oh, shootzu..."
They followed me to the clinic, where Tifa dashed in to see him, leaving Vinny, Nanaki and I outside to stare after her hair (which got caught in the door, and she had to open it to free her ponytail-type thing). Nanaki followed her, while Vincent asked me, "You want to go for a walk?"
I nodded; anything to keep my mind of my brother.
We were in the woods...duh...and we stopped for a break. I called this without calling anything by sitting on a fallen tree trunk. After killing the Head Hunter that resided within it, Vincent sat down too.
"You're really worried about him, huh?" he said.
"Why not?" I replied. "Adopted or not, he's still my little brother."
Yeah...it was pretty boring for a while. Then he got up and took my hand.
"Sun," he started, "will you bear my children?"
"WHAT!!" OMG, he actually asked me. "Are you insane?"
"I knew you'd say that," he sighed.
"Of course I'll bear your children! How many do you want?"
Then a tremor shook the island.
"What was that?" I said.

~End of Chapter 5~

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Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:27:56 PM

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Destiny127What? I SO didn't read that last part...wow. That little Miroku! (from Inu Yasha...)

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:57:03 AM

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aeris7dragonwell, thats cuz when u read it before, i hadnt finished it yet. then when i got back on-my sissy kicked me off for a bit-i finished writing it.

aeris7dragon on July 28, 2007, 12:52:59 AM

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aeris7dragonnever seen Inuyasha but my friend says Sseshomoru's hot... -_-' yeah i have crazy friends.

kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 3:52:02 AM

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kylaVegetaWhat!!! *laughs soooo hard almost starts to cry and is having trouble breathing.* Woa Vincent have you been hanging out wid Miroku???

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:52:30 AM

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aeris7dragonwhodacrap is miroku?

Kupo on August 1, 2007, 4:57:41 AM

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KupoMiroku is from InuYasha (aka the most overrated anime ever, but it's okay) and he's very well known for being a pervert.

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 6:24:26 AM

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aeris7dragonoh i see!!! never seen inuyasha. wanna, though!!!

kylaVegeta on August 1, 2007, 5:38:50 AM

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kylaVegetaYeah What Kupo said. Miroku goes around and asks every pritty women to bear his child. But he finally settaly for Songo.

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:28:46 AM

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aeris7dragonShe actually does bear his child, not children, however.
vinny: WHAT!!!!!!!

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 4:27:56 AM

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aeris7dragoni know. im weird making him say that. and stupid-he tried to kill me for it!!!!!!

Kupo on July 31, 2007, 12:51:18 PM

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KupoWhat Vincent asks Sun is funny, but extreeeeeeeemely OOC. I could never ever picture him saying that in reality (well, I mean in like y'know official stuff anyway. Obviously Vincent himself will never be seen in reality), which is slightly annoying.

Yay Red Bull! He rox

aeris7dragon on August 1, 2007, 1:50:00 AM

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aeris7dragonyah mee hee
vinny:WHAT exactly did i say?
me: oh nuthin.
vinny:...really. *looks up teh fanfic* u r so dead.
me: yipes!!!!! *runs away, dodging vinny's bullets*

Destiny127 on July 16, 2007, 5:11:20 PM

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Destiny127NOO YOU BETTER CONTINUE IT DADGUMMET!!! >.< aww...I love this story...continued pwease!!!

aeris7dragon on July 26, 2007, 11:39:07 AM

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aeris7dragonWHAT KINDA WORD IS DADGUMMET!!!...oh yeah a hillbilly word mee hee hee

Destiny127 on July 27, 2007, 2:53:48 PM

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Destiny127Yeah...I live in a very southern place...o_o I bet if you lokoedyou couldn't find this town I live in on any map...you'd have to google or go wikipedia it or something...O.o

aeris7dragon on July 18, 2007, 2:45:37 AM

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aeris7dragongonna be gone a few days but i'll continue when i get back

aeris7dragon on July 17, 2007, 2:06:08 AM

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aeris7dragonthere I continued. hee hee...it's funny what Vinny asked Sun! Read it, it's funny(ish) until the end.