Chapter 1 - needs a title...
Submitted November 30, 2003 Updated November 30, 2003 Status Incomplete | this poem needs a title...i'm all out...help me please?
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Chapter 1 - needs a title...
Chapter 1 - needs a title...
He holds you close.
His fingers wound around your own.
Rest your head against his shoulder, his against your head.
You both smile. Your eyes speaking only love, neither of you have to speak.
I smile. Lightly.
The love tearing at my heart.
Ripping me to pieces. Tearing at my soul. My heart scattered with lies.
No tears show. Inside they pour.
You love burning me deep inside.
Self-conscious. I frown.
I’m hurt. So I write.
What I was made for, to write.
To write my emotions, on a single paper.
Sad.
Happy.
Broken.
Heartwarming.
Love.
Hate.
I, myself. Am broken and torn.
A broken heart.
A shattered soul.
A savaged life.
A shattered mirror; a shattered truth; all apart of a shattered youth.
His fingers wound around your own.
Rest your head against his shoulder, his against your head.
You both smile. Your eyes speaking only love, neither of you have to speak.
I smile. Lightly.
The love tearing at my heart.
Ripping me to pieces. Tearing at my soul. My heart scattered with lies.
No tears show. Inside they pour.
You love burning me deep inside.
Self-conscious. I frown.
I’m hurt. So I write.
What I was made for, to write.
To write my emotions, on a single paper.
Sad.
Happy.
Broken.
Heartwarming.
Love.
Hate.
I, myself. Am broken and torn.
A broken heart.
A shattered soul.
A savaged life.
A shattered mirror; a shattered truth; all apart of a shattered youth.
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LexxieRedfire on February 27, 2011, 10:50:02 PM
A Breaking Love?frankie123 on October 24, 2009, 7:02:12 AM
frankie123 on
am i loved?JSLOVE on May 11, 2007, 1:07:31 AM
JSLOVE on
yeah, but whats the lieit doesn't make any sense unless you tell us what she is hiding
AmbiguousMonk on May 26, 2005, 6:18:27 AM
Lets see...Names,
Hmmm...
"Splinter(s)(ed)"
"Shard(s)"
"Fissure"
"Fracture(ed)"
"Shatter(s)(ed)"
Would be one of the best in my opinion.
Anything along those lines would work.
I love the poem though, it returns to me thoughts of past and of present.
I know where this came from.
I've been there.
SailorSong22489 on February 4, 2004, 11:40:22 AM
i think that "shattered" would be a good name for this one.baby-kitty on December 21, 2003, 8:17:59 PM
baby-kitty on
it's alright D i forgave u remember?Slipknot on December 18, 2003, 10:39:23 PM
Slipknot on
I'm sorry for everything... Especially that day... ;-(baby-kitty on December 1, 2003, 12:56:16 AM
baby-kitty on
my favorite part is the ending line. i'd like to have more requests on a name before i decide on itzeowolf777 on November 30, 2003, 8:26:23 PM
zeowolf777 on
How about...umm....... "Hurting Love"?