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Chapter 1 - Beauty

Don't be fooled by the title lol this is what happens when i do my "art appreciation" homework while watching CSI. Please comment^^

Chapter 1 - Beauty

Chapter 1 - Beauty
Why is it that people look for beauty
Only in things that are
Accepted as beautiful?
No one ever sees the untainted poetry
Of a still, lifeless body
Lying at the foot
Of a twenty-story building.
Or the amazing elegance
Of the crimson blood
Glistening in the moonlight.
Nobody thinks to notice
The awesome purity
Of the glazed over eyes,
As white as two great pearls.
No one thinks to observe
The cold, stiffened fingers
Clenched together as if attempting
To grasp the darkness
In those final few moments.
Or even the simple poise
Of the final breath
Visible only in the chilled air?
This is beauty to me,
A form of art above all else;
It is the beauty of death.

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animemoon on December 13, 2007, 8:20:05 AM

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animemoonYou are really good at poetry!!!! I love the poem.*-*

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 6:52:12 AM

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Invader_MiraI find death to be a beautiful and underappreciated thing. No one really considers the full effect and value of every event, thing and person on the planet. This is a human flaw, and ironicly enough, I find human flaw to be beautiful...

unexpected self discovery there...wow

FAVS*

FreezingRain on November 9, 2007, 10:55:45 PM

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FreezingRainIt's so beautiful, sounds like something i would think

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:09:53 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, quite a different perspective. I love the take though, I suppose no one really does think about it. At least I don't lol. Great job!

uchihagirl on October 28, 2007, 1:07:04 PM

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uchihagirlso haunty yet with its own unique beauty, love it^^

nextguardian on October 24, 2007, 1:41:09 PM

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nextguardianNice stuff! It reminds me of when I'll think of a sword as beautiful.

bookworm369 on October 24, 2007, 1:44:02 PM

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bookworm369omg i know what you mean^^

KelekiahGaladrian on October 24, 2007, 9:18:36 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianKel: AYEE!!! SO DARK!! YET SO BEAUTIFUL!! I LOVE IT!!

Blackwolfmoon on October 23, 2007, 11:19:15 AM

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Blackwolfmoon^^ ha. o.O" it sounds like my mind xP i do find this stuff "beautiful" and wow I shall Fav it!