I still shed a tear
Submitted December 28, 2007 Updated December 28, 2007 Status Complete | alright.....this is about a recent heart break. NOTE: i did not go out wiht this guy, i just really loved him.
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Chapter 1 - I still shed a tear
Submitted: December 28, 2007 • Updated: December 28, 2007
Word count: 170 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 257
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pizza24 on December 30, 2007, 11:32:31 AM
pizza24 on (Chapter: 1)
thats so sad!!!!!!! But it is ok becouse every one likes honey.sisaTao on December 29, 2007, 8:05:38 AM
sisaTao on (Chapter: 1)
I'm sorry.^_^; But very beutiful poem.^^ Deep, I like it.=] Nice job.^^ *Faves*TKxKari224 on December 29, 2007, 1:54:12 AM
TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 1)
thats really beautiful, im sorry toofiretempesttakashi on December 28, 2007, 10:57:34 AM
firetempesttakashi on (Chapter: 1)
i really like ur poem i wish i could relate to kno how you must have felt *faves*artyfowl on December 28, 2007, 10:25:48 AM
artyfowl on (Chapter: 1)
what a lovely written poem! it really hit the spot that it was supposed to. but, to cut yourself for a guy is to wish for idiocy (NOT that i'm saying you're an idiot! far from it!). you shouldn't hurt yourself because HE'S the one who made the mystake! if you just gave it some time, the RIGHT guy who was meant for you will come and you'll see the difference in your real love. hang in there watery eyes, you have much much more hopeNekogal411 on December 28, 2007, 10:13:31 AM
Nekogal411 on (Chapter: 1)
Aww, Buetiful (sp?) poem, please make more.