Flower of Fire: A New Shinobi Appears

Chapter 1 - The Chunin Exam
Submitted: March 27, 2008 • Updated: March 27, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Kajihana Akai: A Boy with a Dream
Submitted: March 27, 2008 • Updated: March 27, 2008
Word count: 1679 • Size: 8k • Comments: 3 • views: 265

Chapter 3 - A History Unfolds: The Dream with a Chance
Submitted: March 27, 2008 • Updated: March 27, 2008
Word count: 3274 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 215

Chapter 4 - Thoughts in Motion: A Stranger Finds Help
Submitted: March 27, 2008 • Updated: March 27, 2008
Word count: 1915 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 224

Chapter 5 - The Impressed Leader: A Dream Achieved
Submitted: March 31, 2008 • Updated: March 31, 2008
Word count: 2065 • Size: 11k • Comments: 6 • views: 208

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tinystarkitten on March 29, 2008, 7:51:37 AM

tinystarkitten on March 29, 2008, 7:51:37 AM (Chapter: 4)

W00t! This is really good. The plot is well developed and I could actually see it as a story arc in the series. Continue please!

tinystarkitten on March 29, 2008, 6:59:56 AM

tinystarkitten on March 29, 2008, 6:59:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

I agree with SunaNoFara that it is very relieving to read decent writing in a Naruto fic. Thank you.

The plot sounds interesting. Off to read the next three chapters now! ^^

SunaNoFara on March 28, 2008, 2:35:35 PM

SunaNoFara on March 28, 2008, 2:35:35 PM (Chapter: 2)

Once again, wonderful chapter.  The story is very interesting so far, and I can't wait to find out what comes next.  The last statement was very unexpected, you've done a great job with making me have to think.  Akai is a very interesting character and one of the best OCs I've read.  Beautiful story!

SunaNoFara on March 28, 2008, 2:15:55 PM

SunaNoFara on March 28, 2008, 2:15:55 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow, this is one of the most well-written fics on here.  It's actually a reliever!  I've been getting so frustrated with all the fics that use hardly any detail and (in some cases) hardly any punctuation. 
 
The story sounds really good so far.  It was just the right length and flowed perfectly.  I was a little afraid to read it at first (hoping that it wasn't another one of those "stories") but I wasn't disappointed.  I also think this is the first fanfics with Hinata that I've actually read all the way through (at least through the first chapter)--kudos to you!  Reaching the end of the chapter, I can't wait to read the next! ^^
 
You're a talented writer!

hflp on March 27, 2008, 12:00:49 PM

hflp on March 27, 2008, 12:00:49 PM (Chapter: index)

This story is pretty cool. I can't wait for what is in store for Akai.