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First attempt at a humorous sci-fi adventure story

A shopping mall boutique is taken over by aliens who abduct customers. (Characters very loosely drawn on Jill and Alexis from Resident Evil.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Nails and things
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
Word count: 1256 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 198

Chapter 2 - First steps in the new world.
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 19, 2009
Word count: 1296 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 196

Chapter 3 - A little hope.
Submitted: May 21, 2009 • Updated: May 21, 2009
Word count: 343 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 160

Chapter 4 - Things that don't go bump in the night.
Submitted: May 24, 2009 • Updated: May 26, 2009
Word count: 663 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 168

Chapter 5 - You think you know someone, then ...
Submitted: June 12, 2009 • Updated: June 12, 2009
Word count: 255 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 150

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ShadowMagic on June 16, 2009, 2:23:38 AM

ShadowMagic on (Chapter: 5)
ShadowMagicOh wow! the guys were in on the plan. Interesting XD

ShadowMagic on May 25, 2009, 2:37:25 AM

ShadowMagic on (Chapter: 4)
ShadowMagicOooo cool! interesting new characters^-^

liggybird on May 25, 2009, 8:00:58 AM

liggybird on (Chapter: 4)
liggybirdThanks for saying that. Confirms what I was thinking - that I needed to rekindle some interest. I intend to think up several more inhabitants for my new world in due course.

ShadowMagic on May 21, 2009, 11:17:37 AM

ShadowMagic on (Chapter: 3)
ShadowMagicAw no not the Teddy bear.^-^ I would love to go to that place too if it meant not going to school.

ShadowMagic on May 19, 2009, 9:03:51 AM

ShadowMagic on (Chapter: 2)
ShadowMagicYou describe things really well and have a really good vocabulary. Your story is both humorous and freaky. can't wait to see what happens next.

ShadowMagic on May 19, 2009, 8:30:55 AM

ShadowMagic on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowMagicHaha Your phone's don't work here.

I like this so far. I like the conversation between the girls and the abductor at the beginning^-^

liggybird on May 19, 2009, 3:10:29 AM

liggybird on (Chapter: index)
liggybirdThis is a re-posting of a story which I recently deleted because, at the time, I couldn't think of any way to continue the plot. However, I now have some ideas for how to continue so I've put it back.

So this note is to explain to the two people who had kindly commented on my story why their comments have disappeared and also to say 'I'm sorry' for having lost their valued input.