Naruto: The Story Retold
Submitted May 14, 2008 Updated June 27, 2008 Status Incomplete | This fic follows the manga storyline, with my own ideas for filler arcs. It also includes one of my OC's. Enjoy, and please leave comments. If you comment on mine, I'll comment on yours and recommend you in return.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Welcome To Konohagakure!
Submitted: May 14, 2008 • Updated: May 14, 2008
Word count: 3181 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 119
Chapter 2 - Alone: The Teamless Genin!
Submitted: May 16, 2008 • Updated: May 16, 2008
Word count: 3109 • Size: 17k • Comments: 5 • views: 244
Chapter 3 - The Test Continues: Worthy Opponents Step Up!
Submitted: May 18, 2008 • Updated: May 18, 2008
Word count: 3074 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 193
Chapter 4 - Mission 1: The Land of Waves!
Submitted: May 18, 2008 • Updated: May 18, 2008
Word count: 3288 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 141
Chapter 5 - The Hidden Mist Rises
Submitted: May 21, 2008 • Updated: May 21, 2008
Word count: 3167 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 109
Chapter 6 - The Hunter-nin's Secret Agenda!
Submitted: May 23, 2008 • Updated: May 25, 2008
Word count: 3351 • Size: 18k • Comments: 3 • views: 133
Chapter 7 - The Threat of Companionship
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 3155 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 113
Chapter 8 - The Hero: Gato's Shadow Extended!
Submitted: May 30, 2008 • Updated: May 30, 2008
Word count: 3231 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 139
Chapter 9 - The Demon and the Innocent Soul
Submitted: June 6, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2008
Word count: 3220 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 218
Chapter 10 - Naruto's Surprise: The Knucklehead's True Strength!
Submitted: June 8, 2008 • Updated: June 8, 2008
Word count: 3156 • Size: 17k • Comments: 3 • views: 146
Chapter 11 - Courage in the Land of Waves!
Submitted: June 27, 2008 • Updated: June 27, 2008
Word count: 3694 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 101
Comments
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andr28a on September 2, 2008, 7:57:38 PM
Ryouko seems a bit transparent in this story don't you think?Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 17, 2008, 2:44:40 AM
I really liked the scene with Ryouko and the mist-nins. You're doing really well at adding another character without changing the storyline too drastically. Plus i like the way you didn't try to make him best at everything, as people tend to do with their OCsandr28a on June 8, 2008, 5:59:55 PM
Damn your good at writing. Keep it uphflp on June 8, 2008, 7:23:29 AM
Whoa. Awesome job.hflp on June 7, 2008, 4:47:01 AM
DA~MN!!andr28a on June 6, 2008, 10:30:45 PM
YEAH THATS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUTAhem sorry about that, twas a good chapter, look forward to the next.
andr28a on June 1, 2008, 5:57:30 PM
Alright time for a fightandr28a on May 28, 2008, 12:00:07 AM
Keep this story goingFalconlobo on May 27, 2008, 3:10:14 PM
good details^^Falconlobo on May 26, 2008, 2:48:43 PM
nice^^Konohasdarkshadow on May 26, 2008, 2:40:11 PM
okay i havent had time to comment, but i have read the first 4 chapters and just want to say...THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ryouko is so cool, and sorta like me
Well i will read chap 5 and maybe 6 in a couple days (very busy and i have school and homework mixed in with my play time and my busy time which is about 15 hours a day)
~KDS aka JJ
andr28a on May 25, 2008, 6:33:37 PM
Cool keep goingFalconlobo on May 23, 2008, 1:33:39 PM
awesome details once again^^andr28a on May 21, 2008, 7:40:03 PM
Cool keep going I want to read more.animefanatic on May 21, 2008, 4:52:27 PM
MORE! LOLand i miss zabuza n haku... T^T
8D keep it up! :D
hflp on May 21, 2008, 1:59:40 PM
Cool. Keep it going.hflp on May 19, 2008, 12:54:33 AM
COOL. Keep this going.animefanatic on May 18, 2008, 4:40:41 PM
OHHH~~! It's getting bettah! Can't wait for more! >w<Falconlobo on May 18, 2008, 4:19:11 PM
awesome great detailsFalconlobo on May 18, 2008, 4:06:01 PM
nice detailsanimefanatic on May 18, 2008, 3:27:14 PM
SO COOL!!! I WANT MOAR! 8DY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 18, 2008, 7:23:20 AM
I love it! Want moooooooooooooooore! You've blended action and humor perfectly, it's a delight t read, and you've got me totally hooked!hflp on May 18, 2008, 1:46:56 AM
Awesome. Keep it up.animefanatic on May 17, 2008, 3:24:56 PM
Comeback for Naruto! And I can't believe Ryouko knows Dynamic Entry AND Thousand Years of Death!Made me laugh so hard my friend!
can't wait to read the rest!
nextguardian on May 17, 2008, 3:30:21 PM
Well, that's the thing about Ryouko. He's not an 'ultimate super unbeatable omg second coming of the 4th Hokage!' He's kind of a dork who studies constantly and avoids an akward social life, all while wishing he HAD one. Ryouko was designed so that people would say "Huh, you know, I understand that frustration!"Thanks for the kudos!
Falconlobo on May 16, 2008, 2:22:37 PM
funny^^Falconlobo on May 16, 2008, 2:11:47 PM
very good^^hflp on May 16, 2008, 2:01:06 PM
Awesome. Keep it going. Also, I prefered the name Ekyt to Ryouko. Just a side note.nextguardian on May 16, 2008, 2:11:27 PM
Glad you pointed that out. The name change came for a reason, though, but giving it away would be a spoiler.animefanatic on May 15, 2008, 8:10:53 AM
It's awesome! It's so cool dude! Keep it up! You're a real good fan-fic writer! :Dandr28a on May 15, 2008, 2:58:24 AM
This is cool keep going I want to read morehflp on May 15, 2008, 1:12:16 AM
I like this. Keep it going.