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Supportive Shoulders

Asuma and Kurenai decide to help Ryouko and Sakura get to know each other by suggesting a double-date. That date turns hellish when Orochimaru makes a visit to the Leaf Village.



Chapter 1 - Supportive Shoulders
Submitted: August 17, 2008 • Updated: August 17, 2008
Word count: 8911 • Size: 48k • Comments: 5 • views: 309


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SacredWolf on July 24, 2011, 7:30:53 PM

SacredWolf on (Chapter: 1)
SacredWolfwow, great story!!! it's awesome and you're right fanfictions do look like they are a lot of fun to write! now I'll have to try :D

TTfan1 on November 18, 2008, 7:13:16 AM

TTfan1 on (Chapter: 1)
TTfan1I'm sorry I can't leave a good comment. I'm too "out of shape" with writing in general.

This is what a lack of social networking (a.k.a. "communication") with viably insane human beings will do to your brains. =_=

*fluid trickles out of ear*

Tora: *shoves some of Sasuke's ridiculously pretty hair into ear* T__T
Sasuke: *SCREAM* BALD! BALD! *runs around flailing*
Tora: Shut up, it'll grow back in a week.
Naruto: I would take that out of your ear. It might implant and transfer the souls.

See? See my predicament?! I'm ranting!

Congrats on the success, btw.
I just never could come up with a decent idea that wasn't incoherent. +_=


I'm off to go attempt geometric circles.
Blame your little friend for this insignificant comment.

sasuke4kun on September 12, 2008, 8:38:28 AM

sasuke4kun on (Chapter: 1)
sasuke4kunWow that was a great story!! I really liked it!!! Love that you put soOOO much detail into the fight scense!! Awsome really well written. heHE Ryouko is funny and has "cute behavior" LOL ^^ lOVE the way you ended the story didnt leave me confused or anything, most of all left me wanting to read more to see what happens further on!!! WEEE

andr28a on August 25, 2008, 11:32:33 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 1)
andr28aOf course Orochimaru screws things up what would a date with Sakura be without some Crazy lunatic arriving on the scene

hflp on August 17, 2008, 1:40:37 PM

hflp on (Chapter: 1)
hflpAwesome Story. That would be how their first date would turn out.