At War: Shinobi Mercenary Betrayal
Submitted April 11, 2011 Updated August 26, 2011 Status Complete | A bloody tale about war, crimes, and falling in love at the worst possible time. Non-canon to the Naruto universe.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Sounds of Battle
Submitted: April 11, 2011 • Updated: April 11, 2011
Word count: 5042 • Size: 26k • Comments: 2 • views: 128
Chapter 2 - The First Day
Submitted: April 15, 2011 • Updated: April 15, 2011
Word count: 5831 • Size: 30k • Comments: 2 • views: 79
Chapter 3 - Finally Broken
Submitted: May 5, 2011 • Updated: May 5, 2011
Word count: 3919 • Size: 20k • Comments: 3 • views: 84
Chapter 4 - Swallowed up by Blood-soaked Darkness
Submitted: May 24, 2011 • Updated: August 26, 2011
Word count: 4176 • Size: 22k • Comments: 2 • views: 104
Chapter 5 - The Hunt (pt 1)
Submitted: June 6, 2011 • Updated: June 6, 2011
Word count: 3542 • Size: 18k • Comments: 2 • views: 114
Chapter 6 - The Hunt (pt 2)
Submitted: June 14, 2011 • Updated: June 14, 2011
Word count: 3757 • Size: 20k • Comments: 2 • views: 84
Chapter 7 - The Solution
Submitted: June 22, 2011 • Updated: June 22, 2011
Word count: 5626 • Size: 29k • Comments: 2 • views: 86
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YunieXTidus on June 25, 2011, 1:27:43 PM
Definitely amazing. xD I don't really know what to say. Brilliant conclusion, friend.andr28a on June 23, 2011, 9:37:55 AM
That was amazing! If this is the concluding chapter then it is one hell of one in my bookandr28a on June 15, 2011, 8:52:06 AM
I have no idea how I should describe this chapter. Amazing is the only word that comes to mind.I am worried about Yuji's use of this drug though...
YunieXTidus on June 14, 2011, 4:53:54 PM
Wow! The plot thickens... again. This is amazing, and you need to hurry up and write more!andr28a on June 7, 2011, 9:24:08 AM
Woah... To think that Yuji had this capacity for such things. But then after what he went through I'm not surprised.In a strange sickening way, I'm actually enjoying Yuji torturing these poor slimeballs.
YunieXTidus on June 6, 2011, 3:38:39 PM
I'm... speechless. Brilliant, but absolutely terrifying. I may have nightmares now.andr28a on May 29, 2011, 10:27:20 AM
Bastards bastards bastards, Yuji better kill those Cloud savages good.Argh I just wanted to scream when I read this.
On another note I am loving this new direction that your giving Yuji. Well newish, the theme of being hard on Yuji is still there at least
YunieXTidus on May 24, 2011, 1:09:40 PM
:OI'm speechless. I will also easily admit that this chapter brought tears to my eyes. The rage that he felt, and the sorrow that followed... Absolutely brilliant.
Nothing to be concerned about. This is so classically Yuji. A masterpiece. There's no other word.
andr28a on May 6, 2011, 2:52:04 AM
Never thought that Yuji would break so suddenly, but then his mind is always strained so I might not be as surprised.I wonder if he is even aware that he lost his virginity being in his broken state?
nextguardian on May 6, 2011, 4:54:44 AM
It didn't come across quite the way I wanted. I wanted it to be sudden, but there should have been just a slight bit more in the way of a buildup. But it was supposed to be like, wow, what the hell!YunieXTidus on May 5, 2011, 10:34:20 AM
This is really quite good. It's always the little things that break you isn't it? 'The straw that broke the camel's back.' Poor Yuji. He has to be mentally shattered to get lucky. xDandr28a on April 22, 2011, 3:38:54 AM
A whirlwind of emotions are here. I love it.This is turning out (And is) you greatest story I've read thus far
andr28a on April 18, 2011, 5:30:43 AM
Wow this is a whole new direction for you, but a bloody good one. YOu got me hookedYunieXTidus on April 15, 2011, 12:07:44 PM
I love this. I love the broad spectrum of emotions. You did really well at capturing the feel of the mind games, while also keeping them in character and making it believable. Phenomenal. I just can't wait for more.YunieXTidus on April 11, 2011, 3:07:34 PM
Favorite lines:“You take it correctly. It gets lonely and cold out here. You’re going to be my companion, and you’re going to keep me warm. And no, you won’t be supplying firewood. At least…” she snickered, running a hand suggestively down his chest, undoing his vest with one hand. “…not in the literal meaning.”
Yuji’s jaw dropped. If he read that blatant innuendo correctly, then-
“You’re going to…I don’t know, rape me? Or something?”
Just lmao. That made me snort out loud. Also I liked the bit about the goddess, and him being completely mortal. That seems to crop up in your branch-offs.