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Melancholy Attraction

A fatalistic boy meets a similar girl, and an attraction just sort of happens. Kept my usual OC names.



Chapter 1 - Dark
Submitted: July 31, 2011 • Updated: July 31, 2011
Word count: 1792 • Size: 9k • Comments: 3 • views: 393


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andr28a on September 24, 2011, 9:41:01 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 1)
andr28aVery gloomy atmosphere here. But the attention to the detail of his (Yuji) depresion makes some spooky kind of sense to me. Maybe he just thinks too much...
Anyway I like this story and I'd like to see more of it.

lilbloodsucker on August 29, 2011, 2:40:39 PM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 1)
lilbloodsuckeri like it is really good

YunieXTidus on July 31, 2011, 4:34:03 PM

YunieXTidus on (Chapter: 1)
YunieXTidusDepressing beginning, but lol at the closing line. More?