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Transformers

This is a story out of boredom^^

i'm currently obseesed with transformers so i made this story^^

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Creature
Submitted: September 28, 2007 • Updated: September 28, 2007
Word count: 277 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 300

Chapter 2 - Meeting Blackbrawl
Submitted: September 29, 2007 • Updated: September 29, 2007
Word count: 280 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 310

Chapter 3 - A new friendship
Submitted: September 29, 2007 • Updated: September 29, 2007
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 266

Chapter 4 - The attack
Submitted: September 30, 2007 • Updated: September 30, 2007
Word count: 732 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 280

Chapter 5 - Jordan
Submitted: January 28, 2008 • Updated: January 28, 2008
Word count: 568 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 282

Comments

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RadaFox on January 29, 2008, 6:37:14 AM

RadaFox on (Chapter: 5)
RadaFoxAwww cute ^^ *favs*

sonicbabe5 on January 28, 2008, 6:49:58 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: 5)
sonicbabe5there is suppose to be a heart and the end of it after jordan....<3

DragonGirl1136 on November 17, 2007, 12:52:26 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 1)
DragonGirl1136Oooh, nice. Spelling is good, and so is grammar. And the story is pretty cool. I suggest making more paragraphs instead of one giant block.

XDarkTinkerbellX on September 30, 2007, 12:16:55 AM

XDarkTinkerbellX on (Chapter: 4)
XDarkTinkerbellXI love it XD

XDarkTinkerbellX on September 30, 2007, 12:15:35 AM

XDarkTinkerbellX on (Chapter: 3)
XDarkTinkerbellXI love the story already XD

firehead on September 29, 2007, 10:32:22 PM

firehead on (Chapter: 4)
fireheadInteresting.
Nice.^^

Amazment88 on September 29, 2007, 6:16:42 AM

Amazment88 on (Chapter: 1)
Amazment88Emily: Yeahz!!! love it!!! Carly Will probibly review 2, when she gets home from the movies..... I'm sick, and it's Saturday, and I wuz going to go to a B-day party that was based off Halo3, doesn't that suck? as Carly put earlier, I'm currently Obsessed with Magical Girl animes and Ranma1/2. (Sailor Moon, PPGZ, MermaidMelodyPichiPichiPitch, Card Captor Sakura, and Tokyo MewMew to be percise) I still like Digimon. I also like KH/COM/2 For vid games. I also like Naruto!!! but not as much as Carly. Did u c the Transformers Movie? I wish i did. My mom didn't bring me to c it. Anywho Wut's up wit u?

BlazingKeyblade on September 29, 2007, 2:37:18 AM

BlazingKeyblade on (Chapter: 1)
BlazingKeybladeCool :3

sakura3001 on September 29, 2007, 2:13:08 AM

sakura3001 on (Chapter: index)
sakura3001alsome!