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Imagine this...



Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: January 8, 2006 • Updated: January 8, 2006
Word count: 279 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 453


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mikita_inugirl on April 18, 2006, 11:41:32 AM

mikita_inugirl on (Chapter: 1)
mikita_inugirlThis is a very nice poem. I love it. I often wonder what those situations would be like as well.

unfocused on March 10, 2006, 6:15:45 PM

unfocused on (Chapter: 1)
unfocusedActually, I couldn't see how someone could interpert this as "unrequited vaugness". A checker board symbolizes the vast amount of decisions you make in a single day, small or large. A bird breeding = a race, species, mankind. Things I just can't see even the simplelist of people mistaking, I layed it all out as plain as I could. We are all capable of letting our imaginations run wild, I tried to let that be said here, not just with words, but also by example.

hiyuu on March 9, 2006, 8:08:45 AM

hiyuu on (Chapter: 1)
hiyuuAhhh, symbolism, the expression of ones creative mind to another; or just pure unrequited vaugness. Could be interpreted either way, I lean more to the former.

jade_princess on March 8, 2006, 4:06:55 PM

jade_princess on (Chapter: 1)
jade_princessHave you ever heard of a kids book called inkheart by Cornelia Funke. The main story line is about a guy that can read books so passionately that things dissapear in reality and get replaced by something in the book, by something in his imagination. I always wished i could be just like silvertongue (the character) to be able to believe in something so much that it would actually come true

FFXgirl on January 10, 2006, 9:19:03 AM

FFXgirl on (Chapter: 1)
FFXgirlThis story is sweet!!!!! I really liked it!!!!