Poems

Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted: January 10, 2005 • Updated: January 10, 2005
Word count: 85 • Size: <1k • Comments: 22 • views: 447

Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Submitted: January 11, 2005 • Updated: January 11, 2005
Word count: 119 • Size: <1k • Comments: 19 • views: 416

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Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 8:59:15 AM

Wild-Card-KKC on April 8, 2005, 8:59:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

it's beautiful.

Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:25:03 AM

Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:25:03 AM (Chapter: 2)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:23:54 AM

Vampire_Maiden on April 6, 2005, 11:23:54 AM (Chapter: 1)

r we twins cuz im also always ignored

Black_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 11:06:30 AM

Black_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 11:06:30 AM (Chapter: 2)

Good, nice way to show the relationship between a horse and its owner. Yet again, I think that there would have been better use of words in the story, but it's nice. A little editing here and there, and it will be perfect. ^_^

Black_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 10:56:55 AM

Black_Breeze on April 4, 2005, 10:56:55 AM (Chapter: 1)

Hmm, how interesting. This reminds me of those 55 fiction stories, which has to get the plot and everything down in 55 words. It's nice, and the ending's bittersweet. Try and extend your choice of words a bit and then the poem will be perfect.

Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:35:28 AM

Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:35:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

oh yeah....dont kill me.

Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:33:45 AM

Anime_Dude_0 on April 4, 2005, 6:33:45 AM (Chapter: 1)

AHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHa...no im just joking its good real good, i should've asked you to help me w/ my poetry project.

DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:25:35 AM

DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:25:35 AM (Chapter: 2)

THis is REALY NICE! I WUV HORSIES! ^-^

pwees write more! ^-^

DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:22:11 AM

DemonTheifQueen on April 4, 2005, 6:22:11 AM (Chapter: 1)

THis is nice!

You're a good poet and you didn't know but you're feet show it cause they're long fellows!

sorry....my english teacher said that to me a few days ago!

keep it up!

YamiTenshi on March 26, 2005, 10:18:35 AM

YamiTenshi on March 26, 2005, 10:18:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

*sniff* SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!