Poems

Chapter 1 - A girl Alone
Submitted: January 10, 2005 • Updated: January 10, 2005
Word count: 85 • Size: <1k • Comments: 22 • views: 447

Chapter 2 - My Black Stallion
Submitted: January 11, 2005 • Updated: January 11, 2005
Word count: 119 • Size: <1k • Comments: 19 • views: 416

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keirei on March 21, 2005, 1:45:02 AM

keirei on March 21, 2005, 1:45:02 AM (Chapter: 1)

is this a poem? eh...maybe more stanzas please? i don't understand. it's like a story with no climax...sort of boring. (but i am not laughing.)

majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 7:00:46 AM

majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 7:00:46 AM (Chapter: 2)

you are a very good poet! you should become professinal!^^ never stop writing, your to good to stop! +favs!^^

majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 6:59:36 AM

majinvegetamarik on February 14, 2005, 6:59:36 AM (Chapter: 1)

this is a very good poem! it really expresses a lot. awesome job!^^+favs!

Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 16, 2005, 12:10:35 AM

Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 16, 2005, 12:10:35 AM (Chapter: 2)

LoVELY DISCRIPTION OF HORSE! I ACCTUALLY HATE HORSES AND THEY TASTE NICE WHEN YOU GO TO FRANCE CAUSE THEY DON'T EAT STEAK THEY EAT HORSE! NICE POEM ANYWAYS!

Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 15, 2005, 11:59:35 PM

Sexy_Bishi_Queen on January 15, 2005, 11:59:35 PM (Chapter: 1)

You do have a really nice way of doing things here. Your language is very puntual and have you read any of my stuff? If not, please do!

SailorMars on January 15, 2005, 12:14:52 AM

SailorMars on January 15, 2005, 12:14:52 AM (Chapter: 2)

I like the first one a lot more...your a good poet ^-^

AnimeMangaLover on January 14, 2005, 8:58:13 AM

AnimeMangaLover on January 14, 2005, 8:58:13 AM (Chapter: 2)

It's good! I love horses! ^^ And I got a perfect image of the horse because of the way you described him. Great poem! ^^

xomarikzsweetzox on January 14, 2005, 8:54:56 AM

xomarikzsweetzox on January 14, 2005, 8:54:56 AM (Chapter: 2)

animemangalover if you are reading this you must comment it and soory if your user name is spelled wrong

Vampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:46:42 AM

Vampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:46:42 AM (Chapter: 2)

i like the 1st 1 more, but this is good too. AnimeMangaLover should read this, she loves horses ^^

Vampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:44:36 AM

Vampire-Queen-Gothika on January 11, 2005, 7:44:36 AM (Chapter: 1)

hey, that's pretty good ^^ I know how ya feel, sometimes I feel really alone...