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When you smile

Fan fic about xiaolin showdown (not KimxRai or RaixJack thank god)lol XD (dont sue me i dont own XS okay)thanx for reading!
ps.This is my first fanfic so be nice!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Dragon of Ying Yang
Submitted: July 31, 2005 • Updated: July 31, 2005
Word count: 839 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 485

Chapter 2 - The Xaiolin Temple
Submitted: July 31, 2005 • Updated: July 31, 2005
Word count: 1773 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 394

Chapter 3 - Your First Day
Submitted: July 31, 2005 • Updated: July 31, 2005
Word count: 877 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 336

Chapter 4 - Gon Ye Tampi!
Submitted: August 17, 2005 • Updated: August 17, 2005
Word count: 802 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 380

Chapter 5 - Birthday!
Submitted: September 2, 2005 • Updated: September 2, 2005
Word count: 1169 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 339

Chapter 6 - Preformance
Submitted: October 1, 2005 • Updated: October 1, 2005
Word count: 1746 • Size: 8k • Comments: 8 • views: 386

Comments

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RaimundoXKyo on November 13, 2005, 3:09:39 AM

RaimundoXKyo on (Chapter: 6)
RaimundoXKyoi love it! best fanfic eva! i shall show happiness with a fanfic by me! (and to get the happy out of my system.)

please write more

RaimundoXKyo on November 13, 2005, 3:03:34 AM

RaimundoXKyo on (Chapter: 5)
RaimundoXKyob-b-b-but I want his pendent thingy! *starts crying*

!_! i will make one! yay!

RaimundoXKyo on November 13, 2005, 2:56:44 AM

RaimundoXKyo on (Chapter: 3)
RaimundoXKyoi hate clay.

RaimundoXKyo on November 13, 2005, 2:53:30 AM

RaimundoXKyo on (Chapter: 2)
RaimundoXKyodid you make that song up?

RaimundoXKyo on October 26, 2005, 11:37:58 AM

RaimundoXKyo on (Chapter: 1)
RaimundoXKyoCould you do a fanfic of me and Rai? You know...together? My nameis kyo. i have short brown hair and green eyes.

bb3_29 on October 11, 2005, 8:55:28 AM

bb3_29 on (Chapter: 6)
bb3_29so cool ^_^ nicely done :D

needler on October 2, 2005, 11:14:01 AM

needler on (Chapter: 6)
needlerAwesome!
Yaay,its been aeons since you wrote a new fanfic!
So yay,good utter awesome work...poor Jack,always getting beaten up!

Erushi-Hime on October 1, 2005, 8:24:32 PM

Erushi-Hime on (Chapter: 6)
Erushi-HimeYAAAY, coolio!!! i like :) and we have more singing!!! GO SINGING!!!!!! :D

xxLennexx on October 1, 2005, 8:20:00 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 6)
xxLennexxomg the stuff dat wasnt supposed 2 be bold went bold freki

xxLennexx on October 1, 2005, 8:17:35 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 6)
xxLennexxbtw the last line isnt ment 2 be in da song itz just gon bold freakishly

xxLennexx on October 1, 2005, 6:17:11 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 6)
xxLennexx=3 tiz nuting =3

RaisgrlMarina on October 1, 2005, 6:03:16 AM

RaisgrlMarina on (Chapter: 6)
RaisgrlMarinaYAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH HAY LIN!!!!!!! I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! and the SHen gong wu is called the Tear of Ningyo^^... ***FAVS*** I'll have to have my BF read it too ^^

RaisgrlMarina on September 5, 2005, 10:48:31 AM

RaisgrlMarina on (Chapter: 5)
RaisgrlMarinaI'll work on the next comic soon... I'll make sure I put you in it^_~!!!

RaisgrlMarina on September 5, 2005, 10:47:11 AM

RaisgrlMarina on (Chapter: 5)
RaisgrlMarinaYay! Good job on the last chapter too!!! YAY!!! I'm in the next one!!!! ^_^

Erushi-Hime on September 2, 2005, 5:37:27 AM

Erushi-Hime on (Chapter: 5)
Erushi-HimeYay thanks for doing the next chapter! I really like this! ^_________^

*favs* :D :D :D :D

xxLennexx on September 2, 2005, 1:30:06 AM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 5)
xxLennexxthis chapter was made in honer of my b-day the 29th of july, so wot if its over a month ago i was busy! This was made with help from Elyon!
Enjoy!^_^

RaisgrlMarina on August 24, 2005, 3:30:06 AM

RaisgrlMarina on (Chapter: 4)
RaisgrlMarinafavs!!!

RaisgrlMarina on August 24, 2005, 3:28:28 AM

RaisgrlMarina on (Chapter: 4)
RaisgrlMarinaThis is awesome!!! Good job!!! Me likey! ^_~

xxLennexx on August 21, 2005, 6:40:16 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 4)
xxLennexxaww thanx ^_^

Erushi-Hime on August 21, 2005, 4:45:23 AM

Erushi-Hime on (Chapter: 4)
Erushi-HimeStory hahaha XD

Erushi-Hime on August 21, 2005, 4:44:56 AM

Erushi-Hime on (Chapter: 4)
Erushi-Himeomg I SO love this fanfic!! PLEASE keep writing it, I really enjoy it. Nice idea about the ying and yang element and all the little u-and-rai bits are so cute ^^ I've faved sotry and artist! ^______^

arapaho_prince916 on August 17, 2005, 3:11:56 AM

arapaho_prince916 on (Chapter: 1)
arapaho_prince916Nice story so far, keep updating, thanks for the comment on mine ;-)

xxLennexx on August 16, 2005, 8:22:59 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 3)
xxLennexxlol

needler on August 16, 2005, 8:19:04 PM

needler on (Chapter: 3)
needler*whimpers* I'd like to be set up with Clay...dude,does no one like cowboys but me!?
Anyhoo,keep on going this is pretty awesome I cant wait to see what her power is called!

xxLennexx on August 16, 2005, 8:13:30 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 4)
xxLennexxsorry 4 the shortness

xxLennexx on August 4, 2005, 5:30:02 AM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 3)
xxLennexxthanx soooooooooooo much 4 ur comments bb3_29 * hugs u and does happy dance* ur storie shines with awsomeness ( ?.? ) lol

bb3_29 on July 31, 2005, 10:43:39 AM

bb3_29 on (Chapter: 3)
bb3_29This is so cool!! ^_^ i luv how you did it!! its so awsome!! ^_^ Great JoB!! Keep it up!! ^_^

bb3_29 on July 31, 2005, 10:41:55 AM

bb3_29 on (Chapter: 2)
bb3_29NICE!! ^_^ GREAT JOB!! =)

bb3_29 on July 31, 2005, 10:41:11 AM

bb3_29 on (Chapter: 1)
bb3_29very nice so far !!! ^_^ KEEP IT UP!! ^_^

xxLennexx on July 30, 2005, 7:11:55 PM

xxLennexx on (Chapter: 1)
xxLennexxsorry about the bit in italics it does that but i dont know why