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Arianne??

First, she finds that her guardians arent human. Then she finds that she isnt human. then she finds that the boy she likes/hates isnt human. Then she finds that her biological father wants her for her powers. Then he kidnaps them all.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Prologue
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
Word count: 1162 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 209

Chapter 1 - Chapter One
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
Word count: 2277 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 189

Chapter 2 - Chapter Two
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
Word count: 1179 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 196

Chapter 3 - Chapter Three
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
Word count: 1429 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 164

Chapter 4 - Chapter Four
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
Word count: 1583 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 153

Chapter 5 - Chapter Five
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 348 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 150

Chapter 6 - Chapter Six
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 1429 • Size: 7k • Comments: 0 • views: 142

Chapter 7 - Chapter Seven
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 1961 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 185

Chapter 8 - Chapter Eight
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 935 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 151

Chapter 9 - Chapter Nine
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
Word count: 3662 • Size: 19k • Comments: 0 • views: 168

Chapter 10 - Chapter Ten
Submitted: May 2, 2009 • Updated: May 2, 2009
Word count: 1153 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 149

Chapter 11 - Chapter Eleven
Submitted: June 3, 2009 • Updated: June 3, 2009
Word count: 2327 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 175

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Kaley on August 30, 2009, 2:45:55 AM

Kaley on (Chapter: index)
Kaleywhere's the rest of the chapters?
that's no way to end a story!
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

liggybird on July 2, 2009, 8:18:32 PM

liggybird on (Chapter: 1)
liggybirdAn exciting opening chapter to the story.
The background on Luca's origins (and Arianne's feelings towards him) is interesting.
Nice touches of humour (eg the teddy remark and the occasional rolling of someone's eyes).
Not sure about your use of the word 'telly' (maybe it's too colloquial) nor whether you really need to explain why the word 'threatening' is in quotation marks (nine lines up).
The differences between Kieran and Jaxon are interesting (eg Jaxon feels unable to kill his adversary) and I'm wondering how Luca's character might evolve.

liggybird on June 28, 2009, 8:55:19 PM

liggybird on (Chapter: index)
liggybirdOnly read the prologue so far, but this is hilarious. The dry humour of the synopsis ('First she finds her guardians aren't human. etc.') attracted me and hinted that this might be the case.
Talk about problematic childhoods. Poor Arianne(?). 'This is so like one of those twisted movie plots.' I second that.

xxnataxx on June 28, 2009, 10:49:44 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: index)
xxnataxxhaha yea. actually, this is the first ever story i wrote...i've written quite a lot but i havent finished yet. xx

KokoroTsuki24 on April 19, 2009, 6:04:32 PM

KokoroTsuki24 on (Chapter: index)
KokoroTsuki24noooo! the horror! i finished. r u making more?

xxnataxx on April 19, 2009, 7:02:28 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: index)
xxnataxxyep...actually, i've already made more...just need time to upload it...kinda busy with school and all...but i'll try (:
xx

KokoroTsuki24 on April 19, 2009, 5:42:05 PM

KokoroTsuki24 on (Chapter: index)
KokoroTsuki24ooh. ive only read the prologue and i luv it!