Arianne??
Submitted April 19, 2009 Updated June 28, 2009 Status Incomplete | First, she finds that her guardians arent human. Then she finds that she isnt human. then she finds that the boy she likes/hates isnt human. Then she finds that her biological father wants her for her powers. Then he kidnaps them all.
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Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 0 - Prologue
Submitted: April 19, 2009 • Updated: April 19, 2009
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Chapter 1 - Chapter One
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Chapter 2 - Chapter Two
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Chapter 3 - Chapter Three
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Chapter 4 - Chapter Four
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Chapter 5 - Chapter Five
Submitted: April 20, 2009 • Updated: April 20, 2009
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Chapter 6 - Chapter Six
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Chapter 7 - Chapter Seven
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Chapter 8 - Chapter Eight
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Chapter 9 - Chapter Nine
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Chapter 10 - Chapter Ten
Submitted: May 2, 2009 • Updated: May 2, 2009
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Chapter 11 - Chapter Eleven
Submitted: June 3, 2009 • Updated: June 3, 2009
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Kaley on August 30, 2009, 2:45:55 AM
liggybird on July 2, 2009, 8:18:32 PM
The background on Luca's origins (and Arianne's feelings towards him) is interesting.
Nice touches of humour (eg the teddy remark and the occasional rolling of someone's eyes).
Not sure about your use of the word 'telly' (maybe it's too colloquial) nor whether you really need to explain why the word 'threatening' is in quotation marks (nine lines up).
The differences between Kieran and Jaxon are interesting (eg Jaxon feels unable to kill his adversary) and I'm wondering how Luca's character might evolve.
liggybird on June 28, 2009, 8:55:19 PM
Talk about problematic childhoods. Poor Arianne(?). 'This is so like one of those twisted movie plots.' I second that.
that's no way to end a story!
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!