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Tia??

umm yeaa...another story. so enjoy...xx

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter One
Submitted: June 27, 2009 • Updated: June 27, 2009
Word count: 2291 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 225

Chapter 2 - Chapter Two
Submitted: June 27, 2009 • Updated: June 27, 2009
Word count: 1158 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 228

Chapter 3 - Chapter Three
Submitted: June 28, 2009 • Updated: June 28, 2009
Word count: 1630 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 223

Chapter 4 - Chapter Four
Submitted: June 29, 2009 • Updated: June 29, 2009
Word count: 1232 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 212

Chapter 5 - Chapter Five
Submitted: June 29, 2009 • Updated: June 29, 2009
Word count: 2179 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 216

Chapter 6 - Chapter Six
Submitted: July 1, 2009 • Updated: July 1, 2009
Word count: 3169 • Size: 16k • Comments: 1 • views: 202

Chapter 7 - Chapter Seven
Submitted: July 3, 2009 • Updated: July 3, 2009
Word count: 1122 • Size: 5k • Comments: 1 • views: 197

Chapter 8 - Chapter Eight
Submitted: July 3, 2009 • Updated: July 3, 2009
Word count: 1519 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 219

Chapter 9 - Chapter Nine
Submitted: July 13, 2009 • Updated: July 13, 2009
Word count: 2775 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 203

Chapter 10 - Chapter Ten
Submitted: July 13, 2009 • Updated: July 13, 2009
Word count: 2168 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 189

Chapter 11 - Chapter Eleven
Submitted: July 15, 2009 • Updated: July 15, 2009
Word count: 1788 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 175

Comments

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blackcatcurse on July 13, 2009, 4:40:23 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 10)
blackcatcurseFunny, that's what the kids in my school do when we have a sub...XD (pull out there phones and text each other all class)

(This text has some sexual references. Not for kids under the age of 13.)

xxnataxx on July 13, 2009, 6:51:55 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 10)
xxnataxxlol same

blackcatcurse on July 3, 2009, 4:04:57 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 8)
blackcatcurse...
Not all stories turn out happily.
Tia, I wouldn't get your hopes up.

Some authors enjoy a few plot twists. :3

xxnataxx on July 3, 2009, 4:05:56 AM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 8)
xxnataxxlol are you sympathising...?

blackcatcurse on July 3, 2009, 4:09:56 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: index)
blackcatcurseYes.
And oversighting.

blackcatcurse on July 2, 2009, 9:01:17 PM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 7)
blackcatcurseNow they're gonna live in the same house together...
:3

blackcatcurse on June 30, 2009, 11:56:13 PM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 6)
blackcatcurseAww...

blackcatcurse on June 29, 2009, 4:24:21 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 5)
blackcatcurseI noticed that all of your last names are adjectives or nouns...
Anywho, keep it up! I'm still trying to figure out the conflict.

xxnataxx on June 29, 2009, 4:46:50 AM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 5)
xxnataxxhaha that's right. i never realised it before xx

liggybird on June 28, 2009, 9:32:50 AM

liggybird on (Chapter: 3)
liggybirdI think you need to maybe broaden this out and involve these two (Tia and Jet) in a more far reaching adventure. There's humour here and some interesting details, but for me there's too much emphasis on the relationship issue. I would prefer it if these characters were given more depth.

xxnataxx on June 28, 2009, 7:38:50 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 3)
xxnataxxthx...i think depth is given in the next chapter...i think. well, at least, in the next few chapters...it reveals a bit more about Jet...i'll put a chapter up today xx

liggybird on June 28, 2009, 4:39:51 AM

liggybird on (Chapter: 1)
liggybirdI've always been fascinated in observing the different ways 'fateful encounters' are depicted in literature. I have to say this one - pulling someone out of a well - is probably the most unusual I've come across.
Quite a shocker of an opening. I had to suspend quite a lot of disbelief by how (relatively) calmly Tia seemed to take being left to drown in the well. I like the idea of girls being resilient though, so it'll be interesting to discover more about Tia's character.
Some nice touches of humour - such as that brilliant final line.

xxnataxx on June 28, 2009, 5:03:58 AM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 1)
xxnataxxthanks. i was actually worried that she would be a bit too calm for a girl who's just been thrown down a well, but...yeah, i'll just see how it goes...x

blackcatcurse on June 27, 2009, 9:00:32 PM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 3)
blackcatcurseActually, I was thinking He's going to ask her if she'll be his girlfriend.
=^-^=

xxnataxx on June 27, 2009, 9:05:38 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 3)
xxnataxxlol that kind of works itself into the story a bit later on...i think i'm going to upload another one soon...if i have time xx

blackcatcurse on June 27, 2009, 2:39:46 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 2)
blackcatcurseKeep going!
*cheers*

blackcatcurse on June 26, 2009, 11:53:11 PM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: 1)
blackcatcurseOoh, I wonder where this shall go?
=^-^=
Go nata!

xxnataxx on June 26, 2009, 11:58:34 PM

xxnataxx on (Chapter: 1)
xxnataxxhaha lol thx
xx
p.s. you can almost just tell it's my story now cant you? lol what with the weird names and the ??s afterwards...

blackcatcurse on June 27, 2009, 12:30:50 AM

blackcatcurse on (Chapter: index)
blackcatcurseYes. lol/roflmto.