Naruto Takami wo Mezashite

Keep It up NG!

lol great!

O_O Woa NG,I don't know what to say anymore I don't want to sound repetitive and all but this is so great it's hard to describe how much I enjoyed reading it! Excellent job,NG!

I love that your story contains the following:Action,Drama,Comedy,and a bit of romance. It has everything. I'm just so atonished why you haven't many readers. It doesn't make much sense. Just keep writing though NG,remember write to your heart's content! Don't make it feel like a job! :)

Very nice! I was hoping for a fight between Ebisu and Ekyt. IT was a no-brainer that Ekyt won. Yes! That was awesome NG,I really liked this chapter. Sorry for taking so long finishing them..I feel bad.

It's defintely worth reading! :D Woo!

Ekyt’s thoughts were almost a poison to him at the best of times. People who talked to him had sworn that they had never heard someone doubt himself so much. When they pointed out that he had talent, he pushed the compliments aside (thought he was grateful to receive them). Some people claimed that Ekyt was just being modest, and that it was almost cocky. But anyone who had known him for the last four years knew that was the way he was.


When I read that part it reminded me so much of you,so much NG. -giggles-
Anyways,now I'm acting silly.

That whole battle between Ekyt and Gaara was action-packed. Something like that should be in Naruto. More than anything I'd love to see an animated version of this. It's just that good.

Plus that small part that introduces Sai,wow so that's him? -giggles- That was funny,hehe,I'd like to read more about him. Still he shouldn't have made that joke about Ekyt I understand why Sakura was pretty angry at Sai for that.

O_O That fight was amazing,my heart was racing as I continued to read! The way you describe the fight scene is so clear..ah! How do you do this NG? And you don't think you're that good? You're brilliant NG! I'll try to read as much as I can today! ^^ Weee!

Okay that comment made no sense. But what I meant to say was that the fight had been written so well I wasn't confused at all. It was so exciting,very nice!

Darn that Ebisu..grr..how dare you do that to Ekyt!

I thought you said you didn't do good with honorifics? I loved this! I felt as if I was watching the first Shipudden episode. I love the part where Sakura asked Naruto if she was more womanly. And he told her she looked the same..and WHAM!

Teehee..I had a feeling that Naruto was up to no good when he was reaching inside his backpack. I know you and Naruto too well to fall for that..

Anyways,brilliant job NG! You lied to me! This is good! :D

Totally sweet mate. This chapter is amazing mate! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!. Oh and one of the traits on your genin sounds familiar. Lol. I like it!

haha "i think....."

Wow. Great chapter. I love it! The fight was amazing? I loved the mix of dialog and action. Even thrown in humor! It's great!