It wasn't you...It wansn't me...*Love & Death Poem
Submitted November 11, 2005 Updated November 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | Sad...and bittersweet.
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Chapter 1 - Death
Submitted: November 11, 2005 • Updated: November 11, 2005
Word count: 1084 • Size: 4k • Comments: 27 • views: 294
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Shion6 on November 14, 2005, 5:16:50 AM
Shion6 on (Chapter: 1)
WOOWW!!! good poem!!! *favs*** You're really good!Mikagami on November 13, 2005, 2:23:45 AM
Mikagami on (Chapter: 1)
Pweez comment on my art XD XD XDI'm serious your poem is awesome O.o
I really don't know what to say now. Really impressed by it....
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Great work *thumbs up*
Mikagami
Mandarb on November 12, 2005, 10:38:50 PM
Mandarb on (Chapter: 1)
Note to self: Never listen to crazy frog while reading depressing poems. lol.It was good, though I got confused halfway through it. I haven't read a good piece of poetry in a long time That was really enjoyable. Thanks for the linkage. =3
AeroArtist on November 12, 2005, 10:34:17 PM
AeroArtist on (Chapter: 1)
wow. glad you got my attention for that. i loved it. i was a little redundant toward the end, but the story was great and it flowed like water. it was like a song almost. good job. felt like i was there.TheLittleGothofDisney on November 12, 2005, 10:26:50 PM
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Whoa, how talented are u?! *favesHallo-japanese-noodle on November 12, 2005, 3:54:49 PM
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WOW oh wow! I have a request can you write a love poem about murdoc niccals (gorillaz) and my oc if you dont know much about them read my fic murdoc is god! or what lies behind kong studios which i did with a friend ty\!MyoShenzo on November 12, 2005, 5:01:53 AM
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Wow! All I can really say is that was deep. Really deep. Madd props to ya! +faves!!!
OMG_U_killed_kenny on November 12, 2005, 12:35:02 AM
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that very deep and dark... i like it way much! :) thanx for asking me to read it! ^_^sis on November 12, 2005, 12:08:50 AM
sis on (Chapter: 1)
wow thats so deep!great job very nice i love it!*faves u*^^kittenzass on November 12, 2005, 12:04:52 AM
kittenzass on (Chapter: 1)
I LOVE YOUR POEM ITS SO AWSOME!!!