It wasn't you...It wansn't me...*Love & Death Poem
Submitted November 11, 2005 Updated November 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | Sad...and bittersweet.
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Chapter 1 - Death
Submitted: November 11, 2005 • Updated: November 11, 2005
Word count: 1084 • Size: 4k • Comments: 27 • views: 294
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Majin_fuzzy_elf on November 11, 2005, 11:32:41 PM
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MarluxiaLuva on November 11, 2005, 11:28:22 PM
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goodful!!!!!!! kinda morbidHonjetan on November 11, 2005, 11:26:54 PM
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That's so sad...Does this have something to do with you, because it's really good. And sad. :(
BakaChan003 on November 11, 2005, 11:21:05 PM
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Oh my, that was very deep...and very good! So sad, though...alot of poems be sad, eh? Hopefully you get happy enough to write a poem about sunshine and bunnies and flowers and--!!! .......sorry sorry ^^; It was very good poem =DCharonTheSabercat on November 11, 2005, 11:15:45 PM
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Not bad, man (or woman, I don't know which). You got the rhyme scheme down pat, which seems to elude most "poets". A very very depressing piece, but a very very beautiful depressing piece. Nice job.sk8rchick131313 on November 11, 2005, 11:23:30 AM
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oh, wow thats gorgeous! really nice job and everything....yup, im gonna fave it!moonlitdemoness09 on November 11, 2005, 10:59:46 AM
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GARFLAHSABEJABEN!! this is so friggen awesome!! your poems are so good! this is so beautiufl...i nearly cried. *sniff* i love it so much! *favs a bajillion+2.7 times*
And a little of bit sad...
You've got tellent =), keep up with the good work!