My Sora
Submitted July 5, 2005 Updated February 13, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is a story I thought of while I was at camp. I think this one of my best stories. Anyway, this story is of how Sora comes to start living with me until he can fix the Gummi ship. Will he he be able to leave in the end though?
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Arrival
Submitted: July 5, 2005 • Updated: July 5, 2005
Word count: 4006 • Size: 19k • Comments: 8 • views: 356
Chapter 2 - Day 2
Submitted: September 20, 2005 • Updated: September 20, 2005
Word count: 1988 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 311
Chapter 3 - Forever Stained
Submitted: November 4, 2005 • Updated: November 4, 2005
Word count: 3785 • Size: 19k • Comments: 5 • views: 317
Chapter 4 - Journal snooping
Submitted: February 13, 2006 • Updated: February 13, 2006
Word count: 3185 • Size: 15k • Comments: 4 • views: 310
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Iwugem_Itchii on July 23, 2005, 8:51:17 AM
Iwugem_Itchii on (Chapter: 1)
MORE MORE MORE, it's awesome! I can really relate to your character, only I'm Riku luver ^_^KH_Fan525 on July 8, 2005, 1:07:44 AM
KH_Fan525 on (Chapter: 1)
I didn't mean to post that part after the chapter two thing but now I'm glad I did it's kinda like a cliff-hanger!kagesama on July 6, 2005, 12:33:16 AM
kagesama on (Chapter: 1)
It is a very good story, hurry and continue! I want to know what happens! ^_^ But I do have one suggestion if I may, When you use simple sentences, try to fuse them with commas or use 'and'. So instead of for example you say, "I went to look for firewood. It was on the ground." You could say instead, "I went out to look for firewood and found it laying on the ground." Does that help?But you did a fine job anyways! I would DIE if Sora was real. Lol HEART ATTACK!
clamara on July 5, 2005, 10:37:56 PM
clamara on (Chapter: 1)
You should totally write more^^hipeople on July 5, 2005, 12:20:54 PM
hipeople on (Chapter: 1)
I LOVE IT!!!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!Sora is such a goofballl......