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Baby Shower

This a story with my charater Elain and others. Elains Pregnet with Syrus's Baby & every ones delerios! BUT what happends when Naruto & FullMetal Achemist join? CHAOS!, THATS WHAT.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Flash Backs
Submitted: February 9, 2006 • Updated: February 9, 2006
Word count: 1304 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 322

Chapter 2 - Friends, Family, & The Invites
Submitted: February 9, 2006 • Updated: February 9, 2006
Word count: 568 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 344

Chapter 3 - Bad Moodswings
Submitted: March 3, 2006 • Updated: March 3, 2006
Word count: 679 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 265

Chapter 4 - The Longest(Last) Chapter
Submitted: March 4, 2006 • Updated: March 4, 2006
Word count: 2031 • Size: 11k • Comments: 3 • views: 346

Comments

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ZaneDragon102 on February 2, 2007, 5:35:51 AM

ZaneDragon102 on (Chapter: 2)
ZaneDragon102heehee zane i wuv zane.the napoleon dynamite part made me shoot a brick!it is really funny

Faroar on April 3, 2006, 5:44:05 AM

Faroar on (Chapter: 4)
FaroarI...AM...FREAKIN...OUT!!! That would be the most awesome story ever if it was just longer and spelled right!!
This is trey magnific`e.
-Faroar

Faroar on April 3, 2006, 5:29:51 AM

Faroar on (Chapter: 2)
Faroar*Finally wakes up and reads story* Hehe *begins to twitch* OK just a few things.
1.)Only women are allowed in baby showers.
2.)It's 'True DAT' not that.
3.)It's not scary, it's perfectly natural.
Still it's a nice story.

Faroar on April 3, 2006, 5:20:22 AM

Faroar on (Chapter: 1)
FaroarUmmm that wuz just too wierd. Oh and that thing Kakashi said at the end wuz da funnyess. Right prepare ye self.

...HAHAHAHAHAHAHNAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH*GASP*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAH *pisses self and passes out*

monkey_banana_smoothie on March 25, 2006, 2:33:05 AM

monkey_banana_smoothie on (Chapter: 2)
monkey_banana_smoothieHAHAHAH! Napolion Dinomite....
Fire: You spelled his name rong, foxx.
Me: SO?! SASUKE! *leps out of chair**crashes*
Fire: She's uncontions.
Me;*twiches*

monkey_banana_smoothie on March 25, 2006, 2:29:31 AM

monkey_banana_smoothie on (Chapter: 2)
monkey_banana_smoothieIt's spelled Baston. BASTON-KAN!!!!
Fire (my imaganary friend: You got mager issues, women.
Me: NO I DON"T, EVEN IF I HAVE LIKE 68 PICS OF EM!!!!!!!
Fire: Sure.
Me; AND LIKE A MILION OF BASTION!

monkey_banana_smoothie on March 25, 2006, 2:26:39 AM

monkey_banana_smoothie on (Chapter: 1)
monkey_banana_smoothieSASUKE-KAN!!!!!! X3

oddismine on March 21, 2006, 12:50:37 AM

oddismine on (Chapter: 4)
oddisminei have finally read all of de chapters i luv Ed when he is controlling thanks 4 putting me with ed in the story see ya later hayley

anime_freakey4life on March 18, 2006, 12:23:37 AM

anime_freakey4life on (Chapter: 1)
anime_freakey4lifeit`s spelled saskue

totallyspies31 on March 4, 2006, 5:43:18 AM

totallyspies31 on (Chapter: 4)
totallyspies31This was SO stinkin funny. Too bad this was the last chapter though. I really liked this. And I wonder why people had to give Syrus a hard time with not being a youknowwhat. Could I maybe do something similar to this, only I will use my OC character. I want to make mine longer and funnier. If thats alright with you though. I hope so. CYA!!! *FAVS*
Your fan/friend, Trev.