Contest Entry

Chapter 1 - Show Me Love
Submitted: December 9, 2006 • Updated: December 9, 2006
Word count: 1434 • Size: 7k • Comments: 8 • views: 424

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Yamikizz on July 24, 2007, 1:22:35 AM

Yamikizz on July 24, 2007, 1:22:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

XDDD Els and Yami are one of my favorite couples. ^-^ And is the slut Tea? XDDD

WhatevaYaoiGal on December 11, 2006, 9:37:07 PM

WhatevaYaoiGal on December 11, 2006, 9:37:07 PM (Chapter: 1)

O.O.............that was..AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should really deserve the grand story prize for the contest =]

*gives cookie to you*

QueenofGames1990 on December 12, 2006, 5:45:33 AM

QueenofGames1990 on December 12, 2006, 5:45:33 AM (Chapter: 1)

It was kinda rushed, because the only time I had over the weekend was right before a birthday party. What normally takes me three hours I had to do in an hour and a half.

AhouHeinDesu on December 11, 2006, 8:01:21 AM

AhouHeinDesu on December 11, 2006, 8:01:21 AM (Chapter: 1)

Daaaaaaaaaaarh, Mr. Monster is touched. Great story!

wu25 on December 9, 2006, 5:12:25 AM

wu25 on December 9, 2006, 5:12:25 AM (Chapter: 1)

aww tha's so sad =( it's great i hope ya win ^^ gd luckies

QueenofGames1990 on December 10, 2006, 1:25:50 AM

QueenofGames1990 on December 10, 2006, 1:25:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanks. It was weird not writing about my own character for once, but not that bad.

AtemuLover on December 9, 2006, 5:06:45 AM

AtemuLover on December 9, 2006, 5:06:45 AM (Chapter: 1)

OMG This one is so perfect^^ I cried when I was reading this and I could really feel her pain and his pain. *FAVES!!*

QueenofGames1990 on December 10, 2006, 1:23:35 AM

QueenofGames1990 on December 10, 2006, 1:23:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

I've been told I can be an evil writer. In a story I have on Quizilla!, I killed off the character's horse Asfeta (Wicked Demon in Egyptian) and I had three people shouting at me for it.