Legend of Twilight 2
Submitted April 8, 2007 Updated June 25, 2007 Status Incomplete | Continuation of a boys Struggle against Hell
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Twilight
Submitted: April 8, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 9337 • Size: 46k • Comments: 0 • views: 229
Chapter 2 - Heaven Cries
Submitted: May 9, 2007 • Updated: May 9, 2007
Word count: 6548 • Size: 31k • Comments: 0 • views: 209
Chapter 3 - The Trinity Islands
Submitted: May 23, 2007 • Updated: May 23, 2007
Word count: 6946 • Size: 34k • Comments: 0 • views: 181
Chapter 4 - The Crossing
Submitted: May 27, 2007 • Updated: May 27, 2007
Word count: 3113 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 186
Chapter 5 - Truth and Reconcillation
Submitted: June 12, 2007 • Updated: June 12, 2007
Word count: 9183 • Size: 45k • Comments: 0 • views: 239
Chapter 6 - The Light that never Fades
Submitted: June 25, 2007 • Updated: June 25, 2007
Word count: 8414 • Size: 42k • Comments: 0 • views: 194
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k, what i meant was a pirates of the carribean 4? i haven't really read any good pirates of the carribean story around here...so....if u think it's a good idea then....and don't worry, ya won't loose your number one fan!
just another question what's eternal ivarice about?
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it was really good. this isn't the last chapter right? i have one suggestion though, after you're finished with the story. and if leon and everyone else survives, write an epilouge.
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BTW I have two projects that may soon come out too. "With Heart And Voice" is the new one i just started and im 36 pages into a rough draft so you may get to see that next
blusand30 on May 18, 2007, 11:12:50 AM
that was really good. kinda.....romantic. lol!
i just have one little suggestion, use one tense. i think in this story first person in present tense would be best. but you kinda switch around with that sometimes.
"So I was right to assume you where a couple only question I got is why your out this far” An old man steps into the Shack we where in. The Shack was small and only had one bed and some supplies.
This is what i mean......you switched the tense and made into a play.
also the part where Kayla and Leon finally talk should have cleared up how Kayla knew him......just throwing some random ideas..........