The Interdimentaon Cheetha Kids
Submitted August 11, 2007 Updated August 3, 2009 Status Incomplete | This story has drama,a bit of violence and a destiney known to those who wish to walk the periles path. Plz Read And Reveiw^^
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - And So It Begins
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 300 • Size: 1k • Comments: 20 • views: 282
Chapter 2 - Do u want to join in the fun!?
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 261 • Size: 1k • Comments: 42 • views: 439
Chapter 3 - The team and band poeple we have so far
Submitted: August 15, 2007 • Updated: September 15, 2007
Word count: 217 • Size: 1k • Comments: 10 • views: 285
Chapter 4 - And so the auditions begin
Submitted: August 19, 2007 • Updated: August 21, 2007
Word count: 505 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 191
Chapter 5 - And so the auditons begin part 2
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 350 • Size: 1k • Comments: 13 • views: 199
Chapter 6 - And so the auditons begin part 3
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 506 • Size: 2k • Comments: 9 • views: 173
Chapter 7 - The Big Surprise
Submitted: August 28, 2007 • Updated: September 15, 2007
Word count: 410 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 208
Chapter 8 - Kimu and Kayla's Argument
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 267 • Size: 1k • Comments: 9 • views: 169
Chapter 9 - Consert Names
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
Word count: 246 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 163
Chapter 10 - Concert Names part 2
Submitted: September 30, 2007 • Updated: September 30, 2007
Word count: 336 • Size: 1k • Comments: 13 • views: 184
Chapter 11 - Destiny's first song
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 14, 2007
Word count: 798 • Size: 4k • Comments: 10 • views: 208
Chapter 12 - is Love in the Air?!?!?!
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: October 26, 2007
Word count: 320 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 329
Chapter 13 - Omg part 1
Submitted: November 24, 2007 • Updated: October 30, 2008
Word count: 566 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 344
Chapter 14 - OMG part 2
Submitted: April 20, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2008
Word count: 508 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 183
Chapter 15 - Auther's note
Submitted: July 7, 2008 • Updated: July 7, 2008
Word count: 61 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 119
Chapter 16 - OMG Kayla's out of the band!?!?!
Submitted: July 3, 2009 • Updated: July 3, 2009
Word count: 359 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 102
Chapter 17 - A Quick Dress Rehersal on the stage.
Submitted: July 22, 2009 • Updated: August 3, 2009
Word count: 145 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 118
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moog1895 on August 15, 2007, 8:03:51 AM
Ohh! Very cool!Konohasdarkshadow on August 15, 2007, 5:45:01 AM
Name: Jake ClideAge: 14
Cloths you have on: A yellow tank top, a pink skirt and a dawn style hat
What instrument u want: Background Vocal and keyboard
Pokemon: Loudred, Trapinch, Teddiursa, and a Pichu
What in your backpack: 8 pokeballs, 3 Greatball, A GBA SP, Psp, PokeDex, a mini cordless mic, and a picture of her, her brother, and her parents
Hair color and up to where in length:Blue and a little below her shoulder
Eye color: Brown
Skin color: Tanish
Race: 1/2 American 1/2 Egyptian
OC's if you want to have a partner in battle: Jake Clide
Personality: almost the excact opposite of her brother
Konohasdarkshadow on August 15, 2007, 5:46:28 AM
oops...i put Jake clide again...its supposed to be Lucy ClideKonohasdarkshadow on August 15, 2007, 5:30:25 AM
Name: Jake ClideAge: 11
Cloths you have on: white t-shirt, jeans, a blue fleece, and a hat (all my people HAVE to have hats...lol^^)
What instrument u want: Drums or Bass Guitar
Pokemon: Cyndaquil
Whatâs in your backpack: 5 pokeballs, 1 Greatball, A DS, Psp, PokeNav, PokeDex, 2 extra guitar picks, 3 pairs of drum sticks, and 15 extra white t's
Hair color and up to where in length: Blackish Blue, Ash's hair style
Eye color: Brown
Skin color: Tanish
Race: 1/2 American 1/2 Egyptian
OC's if you want to have a partner in battle: Lucy Clide
Personality: 1 word to describe Jake would be...Scared...Jake is always scared and hesitent (sp?) Jake is Smart, polite, and kind and loves making new friends but has a hard time doing that with his shyness. Jake is a starting trainer but has been playing the drums since age 5. He first picked up a bass guitar just for fun at age 8. Jakes older sister Lucy always protects him and is always there for him!
Ok thats it for him...if any more info is needed then just ask^^...i am about to do another one^^
SasukesGirl01 on August 14, 2007, 10:48:16 AM
i like it so far WOOHOO YOU WON!!! lol nice !AlleyCat17 on August 14, 2007, 10:17:24 AM
wow really good and you should space each peoples talks and when you do a flashback you should use italic words it look better and you now when it's a flashback then you can end it with end flashback.i hope you don't mine these are just some idea for wighting stores.oh and great story so far.and keep up the great work.sasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 4:10:43 AM
Name: CelineAge: 14
Cloths you have on: Short genes jacket that shows my belly, with yet another small, pink undershirt. And a gene mini-skirt (I hope I don't look like a hooker! lolz)
What instrument u want: Vocalist
Pokemon: Mew, Meowth, Persion, Umbreon, Espion, and there was two more from the third saga, but I forgot their names. I would say Mew 2 also, but I would say thats a little off the roof! lolz
Whatâs in your backpack: Medicine, Masterballs, and some extra music sheets.
Hair color and up to where in length: Blonde, down to my waist.
Eye color: Blue
Skin color: White
Race: White
OC's if you want to have a partner in battle: Um... I can't think of any, but Jamal (somewhere below this comment, Konohasdarkshadow) is one of my friends. Accually, he's my online brother. Give or take, its up to you!^^
Personality: Very shy, and kind. Never likes to fight, probablly because she is pretty weak to defend herself. Works to become a better singer with her Dad. Scared to go out partying, but if her friends are there, she might go.
~Ok, sorry if it was sorta confusing! ^^;; I hope thats enough information for ya!^^
Symphoniaprincess101 on August 14, 2007, 7:05:32 AM
your in^^sasukeXsakuraforever on August 14, 2007, 3:56:51 AM
Wow! Thats a great start off! ^_~FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 13, 2007, 12:39:27 PM
sorry i havent been onyet i think its a great start off^^ i can just tell it will be awesome.
I want to join though
Name: Dana
Age: 15
Cloths you have on: (I have a pic just check it out on my gallery)
What instrument u want: Bass Guitar
Pokemon: Gustyeon (I have a pic), if I cant get Gustyeon i want Absol (unless u want me to fill out a party list of the pokemon i carry around)
Whatâs in your backpack: the ordinary for tomboys
Hair color and up to where in length: (its in the pic)
Eye color: pearl grey
Skin color: dutch olive
Race: american
OC's if you want to have a partner in battle: none
Personality: tomboy, mostly depressed, loves to make friends, loves pokemon, lets Gustyoen(or if i have Absol) out of the pokeball all the time, quiet when thinking, hyper, loves ramon and other soup, and hates cheaters/bullies/jerks/preps/snobs
Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 1:29:16 PM
your in^^and ya give me the list of pokemon u carry around.you're defeanatlly going to hate Kayla.FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 14, 2007, 6:30:32 AM
yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heres my teamsince ppl r taking the eevee forms im just going to get
Gustyeon (i have a pic as u know and a pic of my oc)
Absol
Blaziken (im not getting rare since its unfair and Gustyeon is my first pokemon)
Ninetales
Milotic (i wouldnt say its rare but if it is i want Flygon or Arnicuno)
Luxray
crazypsychomonkey on August 14, 2007, 3:12:31 AM
hoorah for Bass guitar. we rock.FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 14, 2007, 6:25:38 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BASS GUITAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Konohasdarkshadow on August 12, 2007, 2:04:14 PM
...Kayla is very mean!!!...im glad you beat her!Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 9:25:53 AM
Yes she is><Thanks^^DragonDragon112 on August 13, 2007, 7:05:56 AM
sweet! =3Symphoniaprincess101 on August 13, 2007, 9:22:30 AM
thank u^^