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A big mistake

This is my ORIGINAL story everything is © TKxKari224 except for kaoru, kaoru is © xEmotional and also hikagu is © NAERA
(xEmotional helped me with some of the parts ^^)Claire is © NAERA

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introductions
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: July 13, 2008
Word count: 431 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 315

Chapter 2 - Kaoru's appearence
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: August 5, 2007
Word count: 412 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 304

Chapter 3 - hikaga the teachers worst nightmare!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 516 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 344

Chapter 4 - detention from a whoopie cushion
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 224 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 313

Chapter 5 - The begining of a stalker
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 260 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 291

Chapter 6 - New roommate
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 401 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 301

Chapter 7 - kaoru has a fanclub!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 284 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 306

Chapter 8 - Kaoru's past
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 707 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 320

Chapter 9 - an akward silence
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 8, 2007
Word count: 306 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 263

Chapter 10 - GLOMP!
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 617 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 305

Chapter 11 - the big fight and claires arrival
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 587 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 303

Chapter 12 - Meeting Claire
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 736 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 320

Chapter 13 - a trip to the theater
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 617 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 295

Chapter 14 - Sleepover
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 599 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 286

Chapter 15 - spin the bottle!
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 791 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 332

Chapter 16 - Spying 1
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
Word count: 530 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 326

Chapter 17 - This ones for all the cookies!
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 430 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 254

Chapter 18 - should we even ask..?
Submitted: August 25, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
Word count: 503 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 270

Chapter 19 - Sanome's plan! we go where!?
Submitted: August 27, 2007 • Updated: August 27, 2007
Word count: 653 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 267

Chapter 20 - christmas party setup
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 4, 2007
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 287

Chapter 21 - the suckiest chapter in the entire world..
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
Word count: 764 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 315

Chapter 22 - "the fight for our lives!"
Submitted: September 10, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
Word count: 810 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 293

Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 14, 2007
Word count: 521 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 275

Chapter 24 - hikaga's fight, the girls are in trouble!
Submitted: September 17, 2007 • Updated: September 17, 2007
Word count: 621 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 339

Chapter 25 - Xel's doom, the end *bows*
Submitted: September 23, 2007 • Updated: September 23, 2007
Word count: 886 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 296

Comments

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NAERA on September 6, 2007, 7:45:19 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 21)
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TKxKari224 on September 10, 2007, 5:17:17 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 21)
TKxKari224lol

NAERA on September 5, 2007, 7:41:21 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 20)
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TKxKari224 on September 5, 2007, 8:36:08 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 20)
TKxKari224XD

xEmotional on September 4, 2007, 1:42:37 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 20)
xEmotionallol oh my .
is it a dead person ? risen from the grave to eat brains ?
juust kiddin'

TKxKari224 on September 4, 2007, 1:43:30 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 20)
TKxKari224..ew...

xEmotional on September 4, 2007, 7:48:53 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotionalhaha, blehhhhhhh 1! write more

TKxKari224 on September 6, 2007, 7:40:12 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224yaya

NAERA on August 28, 2007, 9:41:36 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 19)
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TKxKari224 on September 4, 2007, 12:13:54 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 19)
TKxKari224XD i enjoyed writing it ^^

xEmotional on August 27, 2007, 5:34:48 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 19)
xEmotionalwrite more .
now .
seriously .
im bored.
and .
i wanna read .
more .
k?


YOU MADE A LIL MISTAKE !

TKxKari224 on August 27, 2007, 5:38:17 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 19)
TKxKari224i know! u told me just now oK EVER1 DISREGARD THE FACT THAT CLAIRE IS IN JINS ROOM AND SHE SAID SHE WAS IN THE CAFETERIA!!

xEmotional on August 27, 2007, 5:39:05 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 19)
xEmotionalohahoha .
okay, seriously .
write more .
what else is there for you to do ? NOTHING !

xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 7:25:11 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 18)
xEmotionallol xD

what did he whisper to arina's ear ?

TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 7:27:23 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 18)
TKxKari224lol i dont think you wanna know xP

chibi terra: translations she dosnt know either

me: hey i do to!..maybe..possible...probabley..

xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 7:28:35 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotionalc'mon gimmeh a hint .

i wanna know .

was it nasty ? lol jkjkjk !

but seriously, i want to know ,
was it about my little boy creation ? -kaoru-

TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:19:04 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224*anime sweatdrop* ummmmmmmmm........hmm it was something about kaoru?

xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:20:41 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotionaltell .. me .. or il run over and beat you up ! XD
jk .
but honestly, i wanna know !

TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:22:51 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224i dont know what it was L:L

xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:23:22 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotional-sigh-

fine !

but why'd she go 'EEEW!'

TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:28:28 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224because you know hikaga he prolly said i know whats in your nose or something!

xEmotional on August 25, 2007, 8:29:08 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotionalrofl .
okay okay, now i will stop bothering yeh .
lol it was fun >.<

TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 8:35:47 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224haha *sarcasim laugh*

NAERA on August 25, 2007, 3:17:08 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 18)
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TKxKari224 on August 25, 2007, 4:27:40 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 18)
TKxKari224lol itll come soon ^^

xEmotional on August 23, 2007, 2:41:29 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 17)
xEmotionalohohoho ! XD

xEmotional on August 21, 2007, 11:38:17 PM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 16)
xEmotionalhaha, what an excitingly cheerful story .

TKxKari224 on August 21, 2007, 11:39:56 PM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 16)
TKxKari224lol