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A big mistake

This is my ORIGINAL story everything is © TKxKari224 except for kaoru, kaoru is © xEmotional and also hikagu is © NAERA
(xEmotional helped me with some of the parts ^^)Claire is © NAERA

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Introductions
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: July 13, 2008
Word count: 431 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 315

Chapter 2 - Kaoru's appearence
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: August 5, 2007
Word count: 412 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 304

Chapter 3 - hikaga the teachers worst nightmare!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 516 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 344

Chapter 4 - detention from a whoopie cushion
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 224 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 313

Chapter 5 - The begining of a stalker
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 260 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 290

Chapter 6 - New roommate
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 401 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 300

Chapter 7 - kaoru has a fanclub!
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 284 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 306

Chapter 8 - Kaoru's past
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
Word count: 707 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 320

Chapter 9 - an akward silence
Submitted: August 8, 2007 • Updated: August 8, 2007
Word count: 306 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 263

Chapter 10 - GLOMP!
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 617 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 305

Chapter 11 - the big fight and claires arrival
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 587 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 303

Chapter 12 - Meeting Claire
Submitted: August 10, 2007 • Updated: August 10, 2007
Word count: 736 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 320

Chapter 13 - a trip to the theater
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 617 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 295

Chapter 14 - Sleepover
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
Word count: 599 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 285

Chapter 15 - spin the bottle!
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 791 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 332

Chapter 16 - Spying 1
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
Word count: 530 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 325

Chapter 17 - This ones for all the cookies!
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
Word count: 430 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 254

Chapter 18 - should we even ask..?
Submitted: August 25, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
Word count: 503 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 270

Chapter 19 - Sanome's plan! we go where!?
Submitted: August 27, 2007 • Updated: August 27, 2007
Word count: 653 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 266

Chapter 20 - christmas party setup
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 4, 2007
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 287

Chapter 21 - the suckiest chapter in the entire world..
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
Word count: 764 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 315

Chapter 22 - "the fight for our lives!"
Submitted: September 10, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
Word count: 810 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 293

Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 14, 2007
Word count: 521 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 275

Chapter 24 - hikaga's fight, the girls are in trouble!
Submitted: September 17, 2007 • Updated: September 17, 2007
Word count: 621 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 339

Chapter 25 - Xel's doom, the end *bows*
Submitted: September 23, 2007 • Updated: September 23, 2007
Word count: 886 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 296

Comments

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xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 2:52:22 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 13)
xEmotionalHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
You made my lovley kaoru sound like a MEANIE !
you have to make him and claire get together in the next chapter ! OKAY ! YA !

TKxKari224 on August 11, 2007, 2:49:02 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 13)
TKxKari224heeheee heee

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 5:51:39 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 12)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 8:59:43 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 12)
TKxKari224hhahaha im writing

xEmotional on August 10, 2007, 7:40:26 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 12)
xEmotionalya, sister . continue !

-i also freak out and fall to the ground-

TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 8:59:29 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 12)
TKxKari224lol

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 5:48:24 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 11)
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xEmotional on August 10, 2007, 7:39:44 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 11)
xEmotionalXD i definetely enjoyed writing it XDXD

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 7:45:20 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 11)
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xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 1:30:11 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: index)
xEmotionalXDXD

NAERA on August 8, 2007, 2:59:57 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 9)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:01:13 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 9)
TKxKari224i know rite! how scary XD jk

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:22:50 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: 9)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:24:52 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224lol i dont know XD but i totally agree! he should go accidentally fall off a cliff then jin should pop in and kill him again with his keyblade XD

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:31:59 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: index)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:33:32 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224oh totally (LOL)

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 1:42:51 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: index)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 1:44:21 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224lol demyx should totally fall off the cliff it would be great if he rly did that way we'd never have to battle him again! MUAHA

NAERA on August 10, 2007, 6:22:49 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: index)
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TKxKari224 on August 11, 2007, 2:50:12 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224i so agree i tried like 240 times!

Chibi: shes not kidding

Alex:yeh i watched her XD (brother)

xEmotional on August 7, 2007, 1:45:14 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 8)
xEmotionalohohoooooooooooooooooooo this was one of the best chapters, but i think the chapter with the fanclub was best XD

TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:56:40 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 8)
TKxKari224lol yteah that one was histarical!

NAERA on August 6, 2007, 9:55:41 PM

NAERA on (Chapter: 8)
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TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:56:16 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 8)
TKxKari224lol yeah my sisters character if very attractive she says XD

NAERA on August 7, 2007, 2:24:08 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: index)
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TKxKari224 on August 8, 2007, 2:19:01 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224what do u mean?

NAERA on August 8, 2007, 2:58:43 AM

NAERA on (Chapter: index)
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TKxKari224 on August 10, 2007, 4:27:21 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: index)
TKxKari224nonononno he totally is!!

NAERA on August 6, 2007, 9:55:20 PM

NAERA on (Chapter: 7)
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TKxKari224 on August 7, 2007, 1:55:47 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 7)
TKxKari224lol