Prince Draco

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Prince Draco

Author
ThiefKingBakurasWife

Submitted
January 31, 2007
Updated
January 31, 2007
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 6k
Words: 1,454
Comments: 1
Views: 788
Faves...: 1
Rating: -1

This is a new story that me and my friend Laura cam eup with I love DRACO MALFOY^^

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Category: Books » Harry Potter series » Fan Characters (OC's)

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prince Draco part 1
Submitted: January 31, 2007 • Updated: January 31, 2007
Word count: 1454 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 947

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EpitaphOfParody on November 12, 2008, 8:17:01 PM

EpitaphOfParody on November 12, 2008, 8:17:01 PM (Chapter: 1)

Please get a Beta reader. I'll do it. Someone will do it. But this is unreadable.

You have an interesting idea going, and Draco's characterization is good, but the grammatical errors, lack of punctuation and spelling mistakes mean that very few people will bother to read it.

Don't let your hard work go to waste, let someone edit your story! I was serious when I said I'd do it if you want me to. Just to put in the punctuation it needs. And fix the spelling.