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Hexed

In a world where how magically educated you are is everything, nothing's better than graduating from Academy Hex. For two student teams, there’s only one test left to achieve that. The problem is, that test is surviving in the human world!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Overslept
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
Word count: 786 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 168

Chapter 2 - Waiting
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 16, 2008
Word count: 981 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 126

Chapter 3 - Ready
Submitted: November 16, 2008 • Updated: November 16, 2008
Word count: 1473 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 142

Chapter 4 - Start
Submitted: November 18, 2008 • Updated: November 18, 2008
Word count: 1444 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 121

Chapter 5 - Departure
Submitted: November 22, 2008 • Updated: November 22, 2008
Word count: 2109 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 123

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KelekiahGaladrian on November 23, 2008, 9:11:52 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianWow . . . Pong complains about Ferran A LOT.

Personally, since I don't know him as well as everybody else (obviously), I don't have a right to say anything, but he gets on my nerves. I won't say anything more than that, except that his attitude sucks.

Being late because you complain too much . . . that sounds remotely familiar. . . . *thinking of self*

I don't know why that isn't popular; bandages look awesome on guys *mutters* especially Dar-kun. . . . *blushes lightly*

Hmm . . . so, Ferran used to NOT be a jerk and the Hitachiin twins used to BE jerks. That's relatively funny for some reason.

. . . Pong complains too much, just like I used to. *nod of finality*

I HAVE SOMEONE I WANT TO SMACK OVER THE HEAD TO CHANGE THEIR ATTITUDE!!! *glares at a certain yami of mine*

Hehe, Pong is funny, even though he complains too much (I've mentioned that three times now. . . .).

*points* IT'S HEX!!!!! *backs up as far as possible, still remembering the bad impression I gave him* He's hilarious though. Almost EVERYTHING he says is funny in one way or another. I'd probably better not get any closer to him than fifty feet though. . . .

*blinks* Hex insulted Jair. . . . *bursts out laughing*

*twenty minutes later*

*hiccupping* Okay . . . okay . . . I probably shouldn't have laughed like that, but . . . *giggles* THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!!!

Ravin: *blinks* I think she's high on that chocolate she had a few minutes ago (it was a truffle and it was GOOD). . . .

*calms down a few minutes later*

Okay, where was I . . . ah right.

*tsks* One year old or not, they're still your elders Hex. . . . *remembers the impression and gets as far away from him as possible after saying that*

*mutters to self* Guys usually do have big heads . . . *blinks* NO OFFENSE INTENDED!!!!!!!!! *hides in the corner*

*giggles, blushing lightly* Fly in with the apple tree. . . . (I'm finding lots of things EXTREMELY funny today. . . .)

RINGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *grins, thinking of Ryuk and his apple fetish as well as his time of no apples*

Hehe, an unorganized fairy. ^^ That's funny.

NO!!!! NEITHER HEX NOR DARKON CAN CHOKE!!!!! 'TWOULD BE BAD!!!!!!! *pauses and blushes* Shut up Ravin.

Korinne is thinking evil thoughts there, or Hex is assuming she is (and we all know what assuming does to people). I love evil thoughts, especially when they're mine, though most everybody else HATES it when I have evil thoughts. ^^0

Hehe, I LOVE the puppy-dog look. ^^ It's so CUTE! ^^

*sing song voice* Pong is getting COCKY. :P

Team Two, Pong, Hex, Korinne, Jair, and Dar-kun are DA BOMB!!! *mutters to self and blushes* Especially Dar-kun.

Pong vi Capella. *thumbs up* That is an AWESOME name design. ^^ Me LUVS it Wulf-chan! ^^

*giggling lightly* Hex's reaction to his real name was FUNNY!!!! Being allergic to a name is FUNNY!! And awesome at the same time. :P I can relatively understand why he'd go by Hex though. . . . SVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps the Sweeper* I LUVS SVEN!! AND EVE!!! AND TRAIN!!!!! THEY IS DA BOMB OF BLACK CAT!!!!!!!!!! ^^

It was AWESOME Wulf-chan!! Getting to know the characters just a little bit more was cool. ^^ I hope to be able to do that some more throughout the story. *thumbs up* I loved the Dar-kun-ness of the story too. *blushes*

I'M EXCITED FOR MORE!!!! I'M SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!! YOU DON'T HAVE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!! ENJOY IT WHILE IT LASTS AND WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 18, 2008, 11:08:04 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, hard graduation tests. That SO does not surprise me in the least.

Cobalt talks funny. Reminds me of Hagrid. *giggling to self, hiccupping (that looks like it's spelled wrong XP) every now and then)*

I feel bad for everyone having to lose their solutions *mutters to self* except maybe Ferran's team........... *normal voice* But I suppose it can't be helped. 'Sides, it's a lot more fun when things are difficult.

Ravin: Don't be such a sadist Lego-chan.

I'm not being a sadist. It's the writer's instinct in me.

Ravin: Uh huh, sure it is.

*rolls eyes* Anyway, I don't like Ferran period. Don't like his attitude, don't like his attitude, don't like his attitude... did I mention I don't like his attitude?

Regardless of all that, Dar-kun is really cute and I'm sure he'll do fine. *blushes at my own words, fangirl-ish hugging of self (I see that ALL the time in OHSHC, it's REALLY freaky.....)*

I love it and I'm excited for more. ^^ Great job Wulf-chan!!!! *thumbs up*

YoriXYamiForever on November 18, 2008, 11:28:21 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverTHANKS! ^^

Hehe, I love his accent. ^^ (meaning both Cobalt's and Hagrid's, although they are different)

Yes yes, the more difficult it is, the more fun it is. ^^

Um... yeah I can see why you don't like Ferran. Personally I like him, but then again he's not out to kill MY boyfriend *grins at you*

Yes yes, Darkon shall be just fine ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 18, 2008, 11:30:42 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianYOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

Hehe, it makes me laugh. ^^

Heck yes it is!! As long as you know what you're doing that is XP

*flushes maroon*

Ravin: She says she's glad he'll be okay.

KelekiahGaladrian on November 16, 2008, 11:42:21 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianI HAVE SIGNED IN TO COMMENT ON THIS LOVERLY CHAPTER!!!!

Carmos. Interesting name. I like it. *thumbs up*

Laster, Alos, and Shina are also interesting names. Original. I luvs them. *another thumbs up*

*stops self from glomping Darkon, crying* That sounded SO painful!!! (If I glomp him, I will probably kill his back, so I won't XP) POOR DAR-KUN!!!!!!!!! *blushing while crying*

Ravin: While my hikari is off crying, I guess I'll finish this for her.... She's happy Darkon made it on time and she laughs at Ferran because she can.

Ravin: The term "The Human World" makes her blush *mutters* for obvious reasons....

*from crying position in the corner, blushes maroon*

Ravin: *rolls eyes at me* Overall, she loves the chapter and the new summary. *gives you a half hearted thumbs up*

*from corner* LUVS IT WULF-CHAN!!!!!!!!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 16, 2008, 11:59:49 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverThanks, I love the names too hehe.

Yes I felt sooo bad for Darkon while I was writing that part! T_T

And I laugh at Ferran too ^^ He just wanted things to be easy for him - but too bad!!!

KelekiahGaladrian on November 16, 2008, 12:02:09 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianI would hope you do since, DUH, they're your characters XP

*laughing at Ferran* YOU POOR PATHETIC SOUL!!!!!!!!!

Ravin: *blinks* That sounds WAY too sadistic for her.....

*blushes maroon and starts crying again* POOR DAR-KUN!!!!!!!!! T///T

DeathNoteSurvivor on November 16, 2008, 11:53:09 AM

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DeathNoteSurvivornice Yori^^ i love all the creative names! and i could have sworn i commented on the last chapter o0 at any rate, i love how its coming, keep it up!^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 16, 2008, 11:58:08 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverlol, thanks!!! ^^ I like the names too, took me a while to think up the right ones XD

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:58:17 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*blinks* Hex.... Right.... *remembers I smacked him the face with some random object and turns bright red* Oops.... ^^0 *backs up slowly, turns around, breaks off into a run, smacks into a wall, and knocks self out*

Ravin: While my hikari is currently unavailable, I will attempt to critique for her.

Ravin: She says she loves all the characters and their personalities so far, including the "baddies" as she puts it.

Ravin: She says she also likes how you're leaking information and backgrounds without letting out the full story and plot.

*sits up, still red* The ending is great and, so far, I really like Hex's personality. The bad guy is interesting too, though my affections lie elsewhere.... *turns bright red again as I realized what I just said and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercly*

Ravin: Overall she loves it, she can't wait for more, and she hopes you don't get writer's block on this one too while being jealous of your lack of writer's block.

*thumbs up above my head* Great job Wulf-chan. Definitely LUVS it. ^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:05:54 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverlol, Thanks ^^ I like Hex too hehe I hope I don't get writer's block either!! >_<

Btw..... *clears throat* Lego and Darkon sitting in a tree.. *gets smacked in the head by Dante* @_@ ouch...

Dante: *grins and gives you a thumbs up*

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 1:08:59 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianYes yes yes yes.

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KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:35:11 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*blinks* O. M. Gosh.

Ravin: What's wrong with you?

*blinks again and points* It's Darkon.

Ravin: *nods slowly* Yes, that would be Darkon.

*whirls around, blushing, and rubs cheeks like crazy*

Ravin: *blinks at me* Okay.............

*several minutes later*

*turns back around* Okay, putting that aside, I absolutely adore both characters. Their personalities so far are awesome.

Pong sounds funny. I'm excited to see more of him and his personality. ^^

For a first chapter, I think it's really good, though kinda short, but I'm used to Kay-chan's and Cat-chan's REALLY LONG chapters....

The lack of information makes me curious and I wanna read more for sure.

I'm interested to see more on Darkon's background and all that.

Overall, awesome first chapter. ^^ Great job Wulf-chan! I love it!! ^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:37:38 PM

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YoriXYamiForever*blinks* Yeah, it's Darkon lol.

There will definitely be more on Pong ^_^ Yes, it actually was rather short ^^0 Darkon's background... will come eventually lol.

I'm glad you like it! ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:39:35 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*goes bright red again and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercely*

Ravin: She says she's excited for all that wonderful stuff and you're welcome for whatever reason. *wasn't really paying attention*

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:41:39 PM

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YoriXYamiForever*blinks* Why are you rubbing your cheeks?

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:45:42 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*mutters, back still turned* No reason....

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:46:59 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverOh? I don't believe you.

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:47:51 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*glances back at you, still red in the face* Why do you think I'm doing it? Heck, why do you think I'm blushing in the first place?

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:48:42 PM

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YoriXYamiForever*slyly* Oh I don't know... maybe you liiiiike Darkon...

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:49:52 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*goes bright red again and turns around, rubbing cheeks fiercely*

Ravin: Bullseye.

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:54:58 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverHa! *grins*

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 12:55:38 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*rubbing face* Shut up.

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 12:56:59 PM

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YoriXYamiForever^_^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 1:00:19 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianRavin: Hmm... does Darkon know of your... affections, as you put it, Lego-chan (at least in the comment for chapter two *points to it*)?

*turns bright red again*

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:08:25 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverAs far as I know... no But I could tell him if you want lol

KelekiahGaladrian on November 2, 2008, 1:09:24 PM

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KelekiahGaladrian*mutters while blushing* If you want to..............

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:10:34 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverWe'll see ^^

DeathNoteSurvivor on November 2, 2008, 11:49:52 AM

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DeathNoteSurvivori like how you started this ^^ im not gonna lie, im a little confused lol
but i still cant wait for more