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Naruto Fanservice

Just some fanservice! There WILL be lemons included, and I will always warn you in the chapter title, so no excuses.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Green Tea Shirotama
Submitted: January 9, 2011 • Updated: January 9, 2011
Word count: 1351 • Size: 7k • Comments: 1 • views: 198

Chapter 2 - Belated Birthday Wishes
Submitted: January 24, 2011 • Updated: February 26, 2011
Word count: 4388 • Size: 23k • Comments: 1 • views: 135

Chapter 3 - A Valentine's Date
Submitted: February 14, 2011 • Updated: April 6, 2011
Word count: 3846 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 133

Chapter 6 - Following the Master's Shadow
Submitted: February 28, 2011 • Updated: April 6, 2011
Word count: 2545 • Size: 13k • Comments: 2 • views: 185

Chapter 7 - Two Lonely People - Part 1
Submitted: April 3, 2011 • Updated: April 6, 2011
Word count: 1302 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 125

Chapter 8 - Two Lonely People- Part 2
Submitted: April 10, 2011 • Updated: April 10, 2011
Word count: 1164 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 120

Chapter 9 - Hisako's Exam
Submitted: April 11, 2011 • Updated: April 11, 2011
Word count: 739 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 183

Chapter 10 - Hisako's Exam - Part 2
Submitted: April 15, 2011 • Updated: April 15, 2011
Word count: 1974 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 130

Chapter 11 - Two Lonely People - Part 3
Submitted: March 24, 2012 • Updated: March 24, 2012
Word count: 615 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 111

Comments

Comments (17)

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andr28a on March 29, 2012, 8:04:35 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 11)
andr28aYikes what got under Hisako's skin I wonder

nextguardian on March 25, 2012, 2:49:26 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 11)
nextguardianVery nice! I like the route you're going with Iruka's interest in Hisako. It really makes for a captivating story. More soon, please!

andr28a on May 2, 2011, 4:14:00 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 10)
andr28aSo Hisako is a water user huh? That was an interesting way to trap Neji. Good battle, but ouch at the end.

nextguardian on April 15, 2011, 3:21:22 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 10)
nextguardianGreat details for the fight. Very believable; very 'Naruto'. It's not a stretch to think that Hisako beat Neji. And I love her teasing. lol, I just keep seeing Fai teasing Kurogane.

A masterpiece, my friend :)

andr28a on April 11, 2011, 8:37:35 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 9)
andr28aDon't stop here I want to find out more about this fight

andr28a on April 11, 2011, 8:33:27 PM

andr28a on (Chapter: 8)
andr28aLike lightning they meet for a breif moment and then disapear. Hope there random encouters continue

nextguardian on April 11, 2011, 2:18:49 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 9)
nextguardianI hope you do more with this, because I really like it. Neji is such an arrogant little thing. I hope Hisako rips him apart.

nextguardian on April 10, 2011, 2:56:44 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 8)
nextguardianYogurt again! lol. And the "I'm nineteen" part, too!

Kudos for the Mr. Ukki mention, too!

Iruka = Yuji for the 'what are you doing here' question XD

The coolest thing about this for me was the stuff we talked about in passing on your profile showed up here! It's like an inside joke, and I get it! Loved the awkward meet thing.

Great work!

andr28a on April 7, 2011, 10:16:15 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 7)
andr28aThis is going to be an interesting love story. I look forward to more

nextguardian on April 3, 2011, 10:19:17 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 7)
nextguardianVery nice start. I loved the description of Iruka at the beginning and the dialogue between him and Hisako at the end. It really gives a good look at who the two characters are and what they're thinking.

Good work!

andr28a on March 3, 2011, 8:52:34 AM

andr28a on (Chapter: 6)
andr28aNow this is a story I enjoy. This is what I call a Yin-Yang story. What is a Yin-Yang story you ask? It's what NG said in his comment. Two different things coming together to make briliance

nextguardian on February 28, 2011, 1:31:57 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 6)
nextguardian...
What's beyond stunned? Whatever it is, that's what I'm feeling now. What started out as a melancholy, well-written bit of fanfic turned into a very sweet, romantic masterpiece. Absolutely incredible. An awesome mix of sweet and sour, innocence and adult. Just stunning. Brilliant work.

nextguardian on February 22, 2011, 3:26:21 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 5)
nextguardianThat was downright sweet :) I absolutely love the intense emotion here. It was good to hear Sakura's side a bit, too. Everyone seems more human and less shinobi, and when it comes to romance, that's a good thing :)

Great job! Major thanks to you for doing this!

I loved the HisaYama at the end, too ;)

nextguardian on February 15, 2011, 1:41:19 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 4)
nextguardianNow THOSE are two true friends. Yuji and Sakura are so clueless, which is darned cute in it's own right. I loved the 'you need to breathe' thing, and the 'Hisako will have you for dinner'. Apparently, Yamato isn't the only one who inspires fear in other people, eh Hisako?
Good chapter! Can't wait for more!

nextguardian on February 14, 2011, 2:04:35 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 3)
nextguardianI'm absolutely loving this so far. Sakura confessing to Yuji is a nice switch, and will most certainly make his Valentine's day. All parties should be thankful for Hisako, since it wouldn't have happened without her. lol, I love how she manages to simultaneously insult and compliment her friends!
Awesome work so far! Thanks for doing it!

nextguardian on January 24, 2011, 1:55:25 AM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
nextguardianNow THAT is a romance fic. 5 stars there. From the nostalgia to the happy ending, absolutely stellar effort. Very believable, vivid storytelling, and a great description that left me hanging on every word.

In other words, good job! I want to see more!

nextguardian on January 9, 2011, 12:31:46 PM

nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
nextguardianlmao, "Maybe I should just kidnap her"! That's classic! Now THERE is a safe teacher to have!
Good stuff!