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Chapter 1 - A Shadow Incarnate

OK so i had THE WEIRDEST dream where i died and then live on as my shadow and....well you'll see....if youreone of those happy people you might not like this, its one of my more darkish writings...

Chapter 1 - A Shadow Incarnate

Chapter 1 - A Shadow Incarnate
Awake but dead
A shadow instead;
My body has long since gone.
Still I survive
On death I thrive;
I walk the earth till dawn.
 
The lessons I learn;
For blood I yearn
I cannot walk in day.
So my body stands still
And waits to fulfill
This longing to find my prey. 
 
But my mind and my heart
Are set apart
In this struggle within my soul
But instinct wins
And so it begins:
I now carry out my goal.
 
So against my will
I start to kill
From dusk till dawn each night.
My body it seems
Too great a being
For my heart alone to fight. 
 
This conflict within,
Now reaching the brim,
I pause and hold my breath.
I cannot restrain
Nor bear so much pain;
My sanctuary is death. 

But a shadow am I,
I cannot die;
I sit here with my scars.
It’s too much pain
Just to remain
Stuck beneath the stars. 

So every night
I try to fight
This undying desire to kill.
And corpses all
Will begin to fall
‘Til no more blood can spill.

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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:46:16 AM

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Invader_MiraWow it makes me want to stare out a window and just think about what it would be like to live a life like that...I think now I'll read your newest stuff and work down. Hehehe...work down...

FAVS***

bookworm369 on November 13, 2007, 5:49:08 AM

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bookworm369lol ^^

YamiRevea on November 9, 2007, 7:00:13 AM

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YamiReveaI LOVE THIS!! Very beautiful, I have dreams like these sometimes... *Faves*

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:13:28 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverDude, you're amazing! Everything you write is so full of feeling, this especially so! I love it! Dark and emotional *favs* ^^

nextguardian on October 24, 2007, 1:42:25 PM

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nextguardianGreat stuff!

zuvelioke on October 21, 2007, 7:37:47 PM

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zuveliokei also write poems about my dreams ...^^

cassydiddles on October 21, 2007, 10:42:01 AM

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cassydiddlesi like it. its different to the ones i'm used to

bookworm369 on October 21, 2007, 10:43:22 AM

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bookworm369um...thanks, i think..lol

cassydiddles on March 5, 2008, 7:47:41 AM

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cassydiddleslol its a good thing

xEmotional on October 20, 2007, 12:37:42 AM

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xEmotionalwow, i like it, good job ;]

wolfmoon on October 18, 2007, 10:57:06 AM

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wolfmoonDude. Story of my life... Stupid full moon! *glares out window*

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:35:20 AM

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goth4ever.............WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its so dark and wonderfull! You should publish something like this! Its fantastic

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 10:35:56 AM

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bookworm369aww thank u!^^

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:42:16 AM

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goth4everNo prob Big brother!!!!! ^___^ this is a wonderfull poem

sexxygirl93 on October 18, 2007, 9:34:58 AM

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sexxygirl93i love this 1 its so dark