A Shadow Incarnate

Chapter 1 - A Shadow Incarnate
Submitted: October 18, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 191 • Size: <1k • Comments: 17 • views: 441

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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:46:16 AM

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:46:16 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow it makes me want to stare out a window and just think about what it would be like to live a life like that...I think now I'll read your newest stuff and work down. Hehehe...work down...

FAVS***

bookworm369 on November 13, 2007, 5:49:08 AM

bookworm369 on November 13, 2007, 5:49:08 AM (Chapter: 1)

lol ^^

YamiRevea on November 9, 2007, 7:00:13 AM

YamiRevea on November 9, 2007, 7:00:13 AM (Chapter: 1)

I LOVE THIS!! Very beautiful, I have dreams like these sometimes... *Faves*

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:13:28 PM

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:13:28 PM (Chapter: 1)

Dude, you're amazing! Everything you write is so full of feeling, this especially so! I love it! Dark and emotional *favs* ^^

nextguardian on October 24, 2007, 1:42:25 PM

nextguardian on October 24, 2007, 1:42:25 PM (Chapter: 1)

Great stuff!

zuvelioke on October 21, 2007, 7:37:47 PM

zuvelioke on October 21, 2007, 7:37:47 PM (Chapter: 1)

i also write poems about my dreams ...^^

cassydiddles on October 21, 2007, 10:42:01 AM

cassydiddles on October 21, 2007, 10:42:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

i like it. its different to the ones i'm used to

bookworm369 on October 21, 2007, 10:43:22 AM

bookworm369 on October 21, 2007, 10:43:22 AM (Chapter: 1)

um...thanks, i think..lol

cassydiddles on March 5, 2008, 7:47:41 AM

cassydiddles on March 5, 2008, 7:47:41 AM (Chapter: index)

lol its a good thing

xEmotional on October 20, 2007, 12:37:42 AM

xEmotional on October 20, 2007, 12:37:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow, i like it, good job ;]

wolfmoon on October 18, 2007, 10:57:06 AM

wolfmoon on October 18, 2007, 10:57:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

Dude. Story of my life... Stupid full moon! *glares out window*

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:35:20 AM

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:35:20 AM (Chapter: 1)

.............WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its so dark and wonderfull! You should publish something like this! Its fantastic

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 10:35:56 AM

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 10:35:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

aww thank u!^^

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:42:16 AM

goth4ever on October 18, 2007, 10:42:16 AM (Chapter: index)

No prob Big brother!!!!! ^___^ this is a wonderfull poem

sexxygirl93 on October 18, 2007, 9:34:58 AM

sexxygirl93 on October 18, 2007, 9:34:58 AM (Chapter: 1)

i love this 1 its so dark

EmeraldGreenSky on October 18, 2007, 7:40:52 AM

EmeraldGreenSky on October 18, 2007, 7:40:52 AM (Chapter: 1)

That's really good! You ever think about writing a book of poetry? You really should!

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 7:41:50 AM

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 7:41:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

lol you think?....maybe..i duno

KelekiahGaladrian on October 18, 2007, 7:30:51 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on October 18, 2007, 7:30:51 AM (Chapter: 1)

Kel: Wow, that is dark. I like it. Good job. ^^

Blackwolfmoon on October 18, 2007, 7:29:03 AM

Blackwolfmoon on October 18, 2007, 7:29:03 AM (Chapter: 1)

^^ *is left speechless* THIS IS THE BEST YET! *extremly big hug* perfection
and ya know what... i had a dream like this last night o.O" xD great minds dream a like!