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This was a while ago, we're still friends, don't worry. Please comment, and remember you can tell me whats wrong with it too. XP



Chapter 1 - Apart
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 169 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 112


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bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:28:24 AM

bajachick on (Chapter: 1)
bajachickWOW that was very moving.

uchihagirl on November 14, 2007, 9:22:02 AM

uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
uchihagirlthis is rlly gud, like all ur other work
but im just wondering do u suffer from chronic broken heart of something (not trying to be rude I swear)

Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:52:21 AM

Invader_Mira on (Chapter: 1)
Invader_Mirawow. Story of my life?? Oy...Every word you write I sink deeper and deeper into this spinning pool of my own melted mind. Its rediculous what words can do to me...^_^ -hugs u- can wait to read the next one


KelekiahGaladrian on November 12, 2007, 6:04:24 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
KelekiahGaladrian*in shock* That's so sad!! BUT SO AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME!! I couldn't find anything wrong with it....

YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 12:30:13 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
YoriXYamiForeverAwwww, very heartfelt. I'm glad you're still friends. ^^ Very great work as always, I love how vivid it is! And the mountain part was very kool. More poetry I say, more! ^_^

YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 12:21:18 PM

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YamiReveaO_O WOW....Makes me wanna cry...I had an experience like that...SO BEAUTIFUL!! >.< *Faves*