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OK so theres a poem called Richard Cory (u can look it up online) and i liked it and wrote this based off it, sorta a modern version XP Please comment!

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Chapter 1 - Appearance
Submitted: November 14, 2007 • Updated: November 14, 2007
Word count: 228 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 158

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zuvelioke on December 20, 2007, 1:39:40 AM

zuvelioke on (Chapter: 1)
zuveliokeSO DEEP... AND SO RIGHT... one word - wonderful... favs ;)

KandyKane on November 26, 2007, 8:41:20 AM

KandyKane on (Chapter: 1)
KandyKaneOMG!!!! th@ is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U r such a good writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

bookworm369 on November 26, 2007, 8:48:41 AM

bookworm369 on (Chapter: 1)
bookworm369O_o uh...thanks^^

hayly125 on November 20, 2007, 1:12:17 AM

hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
hayly125omg.... thats somewhat sad... why do u write this peom?

bookworm369 on November 21, 2007, 12:18:21 AM

bookworm369 on (Chapter: 1)
bookworm369why not?

hayly125 on November 27, 2007, 3:52:24 AM

hayly125 on (Chapter: index)
hayly125good point... nice poem by the way!!

YoriXYamiForever on November 18, 2007, 1:50:22 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
YoriXYamiForeverWow, deep and meaningful. Crazy how it's so true. Another great work! *favs* You continue to amaze me! ^^

bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:18:13 AM

bajachick on (Chapter: 1)
bajachickwow, that was amazing.

wolfmoon on November 17, 2007, 11:12:12 AM

wolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
wolfmoonwoah, dude, that is so true.

YamiRevea on November 15, 2007, 1:42:50 AM

YamiRevea on (Chapter: 1)
YamiReveaO_O so deep and beautiful, I love this, seriously, your amazing.

uchihagirl on November 14, 2007, 9:25:01 AM

uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
uchihagirlone of ur very best^^ total favness^^

sexxygirl93 on November 14, 2007, 9:09:07 AM

sexxygirl93 on (Chapter: 1)
sexxygirl93wow wow wow....i think this 1 of my favorite u'v written so far Big Bruder......it is so amazing

KelekiahGaladrian on November 14, 2007, 9:09:02 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
KelekiahGaladrianWow... that's kool!!! I like it!!!