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This is basically me feeling like the older generations have screwed us over....but I'm required to think that...I'm a teenager XP Comment please



Chapter 1 - Consequences
Submitted: January 3, 2008 • Updated: January 3, 2008
Word count: 118 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 97


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hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 2:00:08 AM

hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
hayly125wow its great, very i really wanna open up my heart right now! ^-^

YamiRevea on January 7, 2008, 6:10:01 AM

YamiRevea on (Chapter: 1)
YamiReveaVery deep, and really interesting, It's awesome, GREAT JOB!!

Blackwolfmoon on January 5, 2008, 12:25:10 AM

Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
Blackwolfmoonit's true... love the way you wrote this one

uchihagirl on January 4, 2008, 7:18:02 AM

uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
uchihagirlso true, what more can I say, the past generations have screwed us over. ya dont have to be a teenager to figure that one out *nods*

awesome job ^w^

YoriXYamiForever on January 3, 2008, 1:47:05 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
YoriXYamiForeverlol crazy how true this is. ^_^ Teenager here too *high five* Great poem as always, I can't believe you uploaded three!! YOU MADE MY NIGHT!!! ^^ I like the idea in this one, good job ~_^

KelekiahGaladrian on January 3, 2008, 9:01:39 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianThat's deep, but good all the same. Excellent job here, and I love it, just like the rest of them. ^^