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Chapter 1 - Immune
Submitted: January 3, 2008 • Updated: January 3, 2008
Word count: 136 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 135


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wolfmoon on March 19, 2008, 6:52:32 AM

wolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
wolfmoonT_T Depressing.

hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 2:01:20 AM

hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
hayly125T_T it so sad!!! but i like it! nice job!

B on January 7, 2008, 7:23:47 AM

B on (Chapter: 1)
Bo_o That was awesome

Blackwolfmoon on January 5, 2008, 12:28:03 AM

Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
Blackwolfmoonthis one is really dark and has a lot of emotion too it J.T, and i'd never turn my back on you or leave you

uchihagirl on January 4, 2008, 7:15:53 AM

uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
uchihagirlI totally agree with YoriXYamiForever on this one, and its absolutelly amazing, one of your best yet even though it is depressing

myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on January 4, 2008, 1:46:49 AM

myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on (Chapter: 1)
myartmaybebadbutatleastitryAwesome *appluads* Just awesome that's all I can say.

YoriXYamiForever on January 3, 2008, 1:59:13 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
YoriXYamiForeverOh my gosh. I have another of my absolute favorites of yours to add to the list. This is really well written, it's very painful and that makes it personal. The last three lines are just.... wow.... Really great job! I promise I'll never leave! And I'll freaking stab anyone who causes you pain! >_<

KelekiahGaladrian on January 3, 2008, 9:04:26 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
KelekiahGaladrianI'd never turn my back on you JT-kun, nor would I leave you, unless you asked me to. I like it, it's depressing, but good anyway. Great job! ^^