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well....its a poem...with words....and.....rhyyyyyymes....and....wait no thats about it XD anyways comment...oh and if you figure out what the hand is lemme know...actually just everyone guess anyway XP



Chapter 1 - Puppet
Submitted: February 25, 2008 • Updated: March 3, 2008
Word count: 250 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 140


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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 2:58:32 PM

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hinatagurl123arent we all just puppets in this messed up stage
but it was very good

uchihagirl on February 26, 2008, 8:58:36 AM

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uchihagirlwho amazing meez lovez it ^^

I think the hand might be destiny or the past...just throwin that out there

YoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:49:08 AM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, I. Love. It. ^_^ The rhyme is addicting lol Great poem as always!! I love the last part about walking free and creating a destiny ^^

Let's see... the hand... I just have a guess ^^; I was thinking something like memories. Cause you said the strings were broken hearts so when they're cut you're leaving the past behind and moving on to walk free right? *blushes* Just a guess he he

Blackwolfmoon on February 25, 2008, 8:06:43 AM

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KelekiahGaladrian on February 25, 2008, 7:46:48 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianThat is so cool JT! You are amazing! I can't rhyme to save my life, but that is just awesome! I don't get the hand thing much at all so....