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Deja Vu

This is a song I wrote for a friend cuz shes doing some band competition thingy XP

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Chapter 1 - Deja Vu
Submitted: August 18, 2008 • Updated: August 18, 2008
Word count: 301 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 218

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KelekiahGaladrian on January 20, 2009, 12:31:47 PM

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KelekiahGaladrianI feel bad that I didn't notice this before. Must be because FAC isn't sending out anymore story alerts.

Um, all I can say is "WOW" 'cause it's THAT good.

Although it's not POUNDING through my head, I can hear music, vaguely and faintly, but it's still there.

That kinda sounds like my life a little. Just the same thing everyday.

I love the lyrics and the rhyming and just about everything about it. Your songwriting/poemwriting skills are amazing and I ADORE them. It's a wonderful talent to have and I'm glad you take the time to share them with us (even if it does take me five months to finally find and read and review them). I love it. ^^

Blackwolfmoon on August 19, 2008, 7:42:29 AM

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Blackwolfmoonthat's really good Josh! ^^ i love the chorus!

YoriXYamiForever on August 18, 2008, 12:41:24 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverO_O Oh.......my.......gosh........................

THIS IS FREAKIN AMAZING JT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! No, I ADORE it!!! Omigosh how did you write this?! It's fantastic! I can almost hear the music in my head while I'm reading! You did WAY good on this, MORE than good!

Oh my gosh, can I ask a huge favor?! Can I please please please use this song in my story?! It's INCREDIBLE! It's........ I'm running out of words to keep going! I ADORE it! ^____^

YumeXItachi on August 18, 2008, 12:27:25 PM

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YumeXItachiOh,Wow...
truly Amazing Song,J.T.
Ii can't really say anythiing.
Except for,
W-O-W.

<33
This
Song
:D