At War: Shinobi Mercenary Betrayal

Chapter 1 - Sounds of Battle
Submitted: April 11, 2011 • Updated: April 11, 2011
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Chapter 2 - The First Day
Submitted: April 15, 2011 • Updated: April 15, 2011
Word count: 5831 • Size: 30k • Comments: 2 • views: 78

Chapter 3 - Finally Broken
Submitted: May 5, 2011 • Updated: May 5, 2011
Word count: 3919 • Size: 20k • Comments: 3 • views: 83

Chapter 4 - Swallowed up by Blood-soaked Darkness
Submitted: May 24, 2011 • Updated: August 26, 2011
Word count: 4176 • Size: 22k • Comments: 2 • views: 103

Chapter 5 - The Hunt (pt 1)
Submitted: June 6, 2011 • Updated: June 6, 2011
Word count: 3542 • Size: 18k • Comments: 2 • views: 114

Chapter 6 - The Hunt (pt 2)
Submitted: June 14, 2011 • Updated: June 14, 2011
Word count: 3757 • Size: 20k • Comments: 2 • views: 83

Chapter 7 - The Solution
Submitted: June 22, 2011 • Updated: June 22, 2011
Word count: 5626 • Size: 29k • Comments: 2 • views: 86

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andr28a on April 22, 2011, 3:38:54 AM

andr28a on April 22, 2011, 3:38:54 AM (Chapter: 2)

A whirlwind of emotions are here. I love it.
This is turning out (And is) you greatest story I've read thus far

andr28a on April 18, 2011, 5:30:43 AM

andr28a on April 18, 2011, 5:30:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow this is a whole new direction for you, but a bloody good one. YOu got me hooked

YunieXTidus on April 15, 2011, 12:07:44 PM

YunieXTidus on April 15, 2011, 12:07:44 PM (Chapter: 2)

I love this. I love the broad spectrum of emotions. You did really well at capturing the feel of the mind games, while also keeping them in character and making it believable. Phenomenal. I just can't wait for more.

YunieXTidus on April 11, 2011, 3:07:34 PM

YunieXTidus on April 11, 2011, 3:07:34 PM (Chapter: 1)

Favorite lines:
“You take it correctly. It gets lonely and cold out here. You’re going to be my companion, and you’re going to keep me warm. And no, you won’t be supplying firewood. At least…” she snickered, running a hand suggestively down his chest, undoing his vest with one hand. “…not in the literal meaning.”

Yuji’s jaw dropped. If he read that blatant innuendo correctly, then-
“You’re going to…I don’t know, rape me? Or something?”

Just lmao. That made me snort out loud. Also I liked the bit about the goddess, and him being completely mortal. That seems to crop up in your branch-offs.