Chapter 1 - Summer
Submitted March 29, 2008 Updated March 29, 2008 Status Complete | I just wrote this, I hope you like it.
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Chapter 1 - Summer
Chapter 1 - Summer
Summer
The hot summer sun is beating down on me
It is so blinding, I cannot see
There are children around playing in the grass
Not having to worry about class
A warm breeze hits my face
Worrying about school is not the case
In the summer there is nothing to worry about
As I sit in the grass and I do not pout
The hot summer sun is beating down on me
It is so blinding, I cannot see
There are children around playing in the grass
Not having to worry about class
A warm breeze hits my face
Worrying about school is not the case
In the summer there is nothing to worry about
As I sit in the grass and I do not pout
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erandor3 on March 29, 2008, 10:06:02 PM
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nice poem :Dkogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 2:34:52 PM
awsome dude now i miss summer lolzerotimberwolf on March 29, 2008, 1:25:32 PM
now this is a cool little poemGreyPichu on March 29, 2008, 12:43:59 PM
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oh that's a really pretty and nice poem, good job. :]nextguardian on March 29, 2008, 12:03:43 PM
nextguardian on
You did a great job! Poetry's not normally my thing, but this is great!winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 12:00:31 PM
winxgirl21 on
That was really pretty. I love how you tied in a lot of the best elements of summer. =)sailoraqua13 on March 29, 2008, 11:40:51 AM
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Woh...That was so deep yet so beautiful, I loved it! I'm a friend of eelchic's by the way! :3eelchic on March 29, 2008, 10:56:14 AM
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Awsome poem!! I can't wait for summer! We're going to have a blast!! ^^pinkEnVxo on March 29, 2008, 11:00:12 AM
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I know!!!